Adventure
Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge Day 15

Time unfurled
a single yarn from the hem of a sweater
pulling apart the fabric of it.
Light consumed all darkness
until even the word shadow
held no weight.
The heavy weights of fear,
depression, and the impenetrable bruises
of lifelong aches,
melted,
like winter snow being touched,
at last,
by the spring sun.
A room awaits, made for me:
a coffee pot,
always full and warm with welcome.
A leather bound journal,
with ever-ready pages,
and a pen with ink made from my own veins
that always knows what to say.
An old fashioned is served up promptly,
at 7pm,
when my mother greets me at my door
and curls up next to me on the couch
we talk and laugh,
for hours inside a minute.
Candles glow with ambered remembrance.
Music plays the odes to journeys taken.
My grandfather fishes by a river nearby,
teeming with bass,
and I glimpse the child he never was
smile at me.
Every morning the ocean of my backyard
kisses my feet as she waves hello,
her salt no longer bitter.
I greet the blood of my blood
and bone of my bone upon the shore.
They wear faces that, through centuries
still resemble my own.
We tell stories around bonfires
of the legends that we were in our time.
My soul is made tangible.
I touch the fringes of my warrior spirit,
caress the edges of my creativity.
I dance with the stars before dawn
upon a floor made of crystalline moonbeams,
and marvel at how green,
how delicate,
how infinitesimal,
is the Earth below.
Author's Note
We are halfway through the challenge!! I just want to take a moment to thank you all for reading, supporting, and participating. It's truly been so wonderful to read everyone's poems, see the supportive comments on everyone's work, and be a part of your inspiration in even the smallest way. It's been the highlight of my days this month, and I don't know about you, but I've needed this ray of sunshine.
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Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
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Comments (11)
15 days later, here’s my poem: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/lady-adventure%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Your poem is an amazing adventure… my favourite lines are: “when my mother greets me at my door and curls up next to me on the couch we talk and laugh, for hours inside a minute. “🤗
You took us on a beautiful journey, and this challenge is a beautiful journey. Thank you for inviting us all along. https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/joy-unbound%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Oh, I am so far behind now, but still enjoying the challenges! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-quest-i-cannot-speak%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Hi Ellie, here is my Day 15 poem: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/marcella-s-short-adventure%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E I put it on Denise's story by mistake 😒😒
I loved this. Impossible to pick just one line.
Here’s my entry for Adventure: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/adventure-6cruv0gk7%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here's mine for this prompt: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/adventure-iqh5v0ql0%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Wow! 15 down already! Time flies! Keep up the great work, Ellie!
Fabulous yet again. As I'm writing this comment, I'm wearing a top hat. I told you.
When will I be fortunate enough? Unload the burden
Wonderful written