Adventure
For Ellie Hoovs' Unofficial Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge 15
By Rachel DeemingPublished 8 months ago • 1 min read
Photo by Cristofer Maximilian on Unsplash
There once was a girl with a tent
Who bought it to stop paying rent.
Under skies lit by stars
Comets circling Mars
Her life had become heaven sent.
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Comments (8)
Thank you Rachel, for writing a poem that is so needed in my life! Craving simplicity right now...
Sounds quite dreamy!
Hi Ellie, here is mt Day 15 poem: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/marcella-s-short-adventure%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E (Catching up 😊😊).
This is beautiful. Makes me want to pack up my bags and run away.
Hear! Hear! Sounds like bliss to me.
I now want to sleep in a tent….love this
Oh I love it! sounds like the perfect vacation.
How nice! It makes me want to be that girl to enjoy the starry sky and silence. You are obviously an expert on finding the good images on Unsplash. 😁