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Adventure

For Ellie Hoovs' Unofficial Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge 15

By Rachel DeemingPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
Adventure
Photo by Cristofer Maximilian on Unsplash

There once was a girl with a tent

Who bought it to stop paying rent.

Under skies lit by stars

Comets circling Mars

Her life had become heaven sent.

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You can read about Ellie's Wonderland Challenge in the link below. Hey! Why not give it a try?

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Rachel Deeming

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  • The Dani Writer8 months ago

    Thank you Rachel, for writing a poem that is so needed in my life! Craving simplicity right now...

  • D.K. Shepard8 months ago

    Sounds quite dreamy!

  • Calvin London8 months ago

    Hi Ellie, here is mt Day 15 poem: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/marcella-s-short-adventure%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E (Catching up 😊😊).

  • Caroline Craven8 months ago

    This is beautiful. Makes me want to pack up my bags and run away.

  • Hear! Hear! Sounds like bliss to me.

  • JBaz8 months ago

    I now want to sleep in a tent….love this

  • Ellie Hoovs8 months ago

    Oh I love it! sounds like the perfect vacation.

  • Susan Fourtané 8 months ago

    How nice! It makes me want to be that girl to enjoy the starry sky and silence. You are obviously an expert on finding the good images on Unsplash. 😁

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