
Squishy mud hugs toes
Chest rises and falls, like sea
No clouds seen today
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Planes fly over head
Crab on shore is mostly dead
Kids run other way
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Kayaks stand erect
Nobody seems to rent them
One day, I will though
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Volleyball rolls down
Glaring sun causes a frown
Forgot sunglasses
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Water is so clear
Left all the ill fear behind
Joy is captain, right?
~ ~ ~
Held in time so sweet
Positive energy treat
Soaking warmth right now
About the Creator
Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Comments (2)
This haiku sequence is like a gentle ocean breeze—calming, vivid, and effortlessly immersive. Joy better be the captain—no mutiny allowed on this peaceful escape! 🙂✨
Love it, your dose of Vitamin Sea 😊🌟 I've never gone kayaking and I would like to, so let's go! 😀