Abandoned Heart
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Expressionless…
I left your phone,
On the side of the Bed, where you nodded off 💤
Lonely Sentiments were located in my Mentality -
The ones you sowed…
How could you, be so inquisitive,
Nowadays Empty?
The reason for Heartbreak ❤️🩹 Philosophies is the Power of Love ❤️.
Leave my heart but don't
You break it-💔
Limitations are heavy
So you can’t
Haul it…
Alone I pose
Inside my senses,
Unfold-
Desolate and weeping,
How could you leave me?
It was not the imperfections,
It was the fables,
You used To beguile me…
I rather you leave
Than to probe
For Reasons.
About the Creator
HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (21)
I rather you leave than probe for reasons.. Eye catchy! Amazing Loui
So heartfelt! I was impressed!
That was exceptionally well written. I was thoroughly impressed and enjoyed it immensely❤️❤️
Beautiful and touching❤️❤️
Beautiful
once again you manage to make me want to learn how to write like this.
Heartfelt and sad...but beautiful, too. LOVELY poem!!
Nice one!
Wonderfully written.
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This was awesome! Loved the way it flowed to a natural stop at the end.
Wow, so vivid. Touched me with the three lines at the end, I'd rather you leave, than to probe for reasons.
Oh God this was so heartbreaking! Loved your poem!
Beautifully written!
Just the latest in the works of the brilliant Handsomelouii!! Fantastically done, my friend!
Beautifully written. Well done.
Heartbreaking!!! Beautifully written!!! Left some love!!!❤️❤️💕
The ending was so intense. I felt every word of this poem. ✍🏽👏🏼👏🏼🩵
Fantastic writing Lil bro! I wish heartbreak didn't exist...
This is wonderful, Handsome.
I've read this over several times now, once even backwards, line by line, & I'm still not quite sure what is happening or has happened. Has the other left physically, emotionally, psychologically, spiritually or is it the fear they will that is causing you to abandon them? All of which seems completely apropos for someone feeling abandoned. The final lines are what bring it all together for me: "I rather you leave Than to probe For Reasons."