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A Storm for Jamaica. A Rainbow rose for my tiny country's safe survival.

Prayers painting the sky.

By Novel AllenPublished 3 months ago Updated 3 months ago 1 min read

Hands joined in prayer

A mighty storm named Melissa meanders

By Steve Johnson on Unsplash

As the wrath of nature descends

Breaths held - watching - anticipating

Hoping for the best - a slow path doth fury slither

Nature does not play fair, unleashing wrath

Chastising the guilty and innocent alike

The hands of the tide of time are unstoppable

They unfurl - unfold...gathering a mighty breath

Waiting to exhale...

By Max LaRochelle on Unsplash

The last storm was in 1988, a category 3 - it destroyed the island.

Melissa is a category 5.

SIGH!

Monday, October 27, 2025.

Balladperformance poetryStream of Consciousness

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Novel Allen

You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.

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  • Tiffany Gordon3 months ago

    I thought of you when I learned of Melissa, No! I pray that the people of your homeland are okay 🙏🏾Sending you a huge hug of comfort!

  • Omgggg, Melissa is so scaryyyy! I hope everyone would be okay 🥺❤️

  • PK Colleran3 months ago

    Prayers for the people and beautiful lands of Jamaica. 🙏🏽💙🕊️🌿

  • ⛈️ "Nature does not play fair, unleashing wrath/Chastising the guilty and innocent alike" ... and this, dear Novel, is one of my greatest laments. Maybe that's one reason I write and play My Music, almost nonstop: I'm riding the winds and waves that I cast into the world as songs... instead of being destroyed by Life's Wraths, I create. Great Writing & Stunning Picture! ⛈️💜⛈️

  • Antoni De'Leon3 months ago

    Prayers and hopes of a complete change in direction for all the islands. Prayers for safety for everyone. Let's keep the faith light burning.

  • Sonia Heidi Unruh3 months ago

    Thank you for this call to prayer for your beautiful homeland. 💙

  • Lamar Wiggins3 months ago

    Prayers going up for everyone's safety. And that it loses strength. Better yet, miss them entirely. 🙏

  • Stephanie Hoogstad3 months ago

    My thoughts are going out to your home country! Wonderful poem, though, with beautiful images accompanying it.

  • Sam Spinelli3 months ago

    My exwife is named Melissa. I hope the Caribbean weathers her namesake better than I did. Scary natural forces, I’m worried for the people living in the path of this storm.

  • I hope that storm blows itself out over the Atlantic. Powerful and moving words

  • Mariann Carroll3 months ago

    Prayers for your island!

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