A Siamese Twin Named Victory🏆
~Inspirational Poetry 2025~ 🏃🏾
Don't you trouble your pretty little heart about your pace; remember the tortoise mastered the task at hand and won the race...🐢
Please keep going even if it hurts; one day your unyielding persistence will cause defeat to meet dirt...🐢
Always allow endurance to propel you towards your win... And I guarantee that its Siamese Twin named Victory will be there to greet you with open arms and a trophy of triumph at race's end...🐢
About the Creator
Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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Comments (34)
That's a pretty terrapin there! These little guys are a little slow, but sure. Persistence pays!
I love this piece. Congrats on Top Story 🏆🏆✍️✍️
Loved this motivational piece!
This is wonderful! I lingered on the bit about "your unyielding persistence" 😁
Please, pretty please, I hope so!! I loved your poem…..congrats on Top Story.
Congratulations on top story!! 💌🎉🥳🎉🥳🎉🥳🎉
That's great, Tiffany!! Congratulations on your top story!!🎉🎉🎉
Inspired & beautiful work Tiffy
Excellent!
This is inspiring poetic magic! love it, Tiffany! congrats on Top Story!
You do inspire, my friend! ⚡ ❤️ ⚡
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Amazing read!
Tiffany, what a wonderful read on a Saturday morning. I am now filled with hope. Congratulations
Yayy! Tiffff congrats on your incredible Top Story 🎉🤍
What an uplifting sentiment expressed here! You are such light Tiffany! 😍
Slow and steady wins the race, it is said. Some forge ahead and win material things, others take the time to help a fallen warrior. Words of wisdom and inspiration always welcome.
So inspirational…!!! Thank you, Tiffany, for these words of wisdom.
Well-wrought! The tortoise doesn't hide but lives well-protected in its shell, and sees the world with a slow wonder that the sleepy, restless hare forgoes, so to my mind the tortoise won before it even crossed the finish line, for its experience is all the richer.
Slow and steady always wins the race. This was so uplifting. Loved it so much!
You always give us a unique approach to illustrating a point. The tortoise may take its time getting there but according to this timeless fable, it's going to win in the end. 💖
Endurance! Yes! I like this, Tiff. 😊👍
Love the vibe of this! It's got that motivational push wrapped in a gentle reminder—slow and steady wins the race. The idea of victory being a Siamese twin to endurance is a brilliant twist, making the message all the more memorable. Keep going, you’ve got this! 💕✨
Aww beautiful and inspirational ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Yes! Yes!! Yes!!! Spectacular and inspiring!!!❤️❤️💕