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A Siamese Twin Named Victory🏆

~Inspirational Poetry 2025~ 🏃🏾

By Tiffany GordonPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - January 2025
A Siamese Twin Named Victory🏆
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Don't you trouble your pretty little heart about your pace; remember the tortoise mastered the task at hand and won the race...🐢

Please keep going even if it hurts; one day your unyielding persistence will cause defeat to meet dirt...🐢

Always allow endurance to propel you towards your win... And I guarantee that its Siamese Twin named Victory will be there to greet you with open arms and a trophy of triumph at race's end...🐢

 

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Tiffany Gordon

I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.

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  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin10 months ago

    That's a pretty terrapin there! These little guys are a little slow, but sure. Persistence pays!

  • Marie381Uk 11 months ago

    I love this piece. Congrats on Top Story 🏆🏆✍️✍️

  • Loved this motivational piece!

  • L.C. Schäfer12 months ago

    This is wonderful! I lingered on the bit about "your unyielding persistence" 😁

  • Andrea Corwin 12 months ago

    Please, pretty please, I hope so!! I loved your poem…..congrats on Top Story.

  • Kodah12 months ago

    Congratulations on top story!! 💌🎉🥳🎉🥳🎉🥳🎉

  • Denise E Lindquist12 months ago

    That's great, Tiffany!! Congratulations on your top story!!🎉🎉🎉

  • Melissa Ingoldsby12 months ago

    Inspired & beautiful work Tiffy

  • Tedo Sharadenidze12 months ago

    Excellent!

  • Paul Stewart12 months ago

    This is inspiring poetic magic! love it, Tiffany! congrats on Top Story!

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡12 months ago

    You do inspire, my friend! ⚡ ❤️ ⚡

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Marvelous Michael12 months ago

    Amazing read!

  • JBaz12 months ago

    Tiffany, what a wonderful read on a Saturday morning. I am now filled with hope. Congratulations

  • Komal12 months ago

    Yayy! Tiffff congrats on your incredible Top Story 🎉🤍

  • The Dani Writer12 months ago

    What an uplifting sentiment expressed here! You are such light Tiffany! 😍

  • Antoni De'Leon12 months ago

    Slow and steady wins the race, it is said. Some forge ahead and win material things, others take the time to help a fallen warrior. Words of wisdom and inspiration always welcome.

  • So inspirational…!!! Thank you, Tiffany, for these words of wisdom.

  • C. Rommial Butler12 months ago

    Well-wrought! The tortoise doesn't hide but lives well-protected in its shell, and sees the world with a slow wonder that the sleepy, restless hare forgoes, so to my mind the tortoise won before it even crossed the finish line, for its experience is all the richer.

  • Slow and steady always wins the race. This was so uplifting. Loved it so much!

  • Lamar Wiggins12 months ago

    You always give us a unique approach to illustrating a point. The tortoise may take its time getting there but according to this timeless fable, it's going to win in the end. 💖

  • Grz Colm12 months ago

    Endurance! Yes! I like this, Tiff. 😊👍

  • Komal12 months ago

    Love the vibe of this! It's got that motivational push wrapped in a gentle reminder—slow and steady wins the race. The idea of victory being a Siamese twin to endurance is a brilliant twist, making the message all the more memorable. Keep going, you’ve got this! 💕✨

  • L.I.E12 months ago

    Aww beautiful and inspirational ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  • Babs Iverson12 months ago

    Yes! Yes!! Yes!!! Spectacular and inspiring!!!❤️❤️💕

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