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A Love Bus❤️

I was going for a conveyance, and I ended up being stuck inside a Fantastic Fantasy...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
A Love Bus❤️
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Dear Journal,

I fell in love on a Bus Ride.

I waited, at the Bus cessation,

For maybe 5 mins,

Before he arrived.

My heart, put up with an expedition.

It wasn't extensive, it was just a fantastic Fantasy...

He jigged back, and let me step forth willingly.

I glared, and he gave me a wink...

However I Dissemble to not see,

And I took a seat...

But he moved toward me and assumed a seat closer to me.

From the corner of my vision,

I felt his stare...

With it my mind, I wished to be anywhere,

As long as he was there...

He asked my name,

After the Staring game.

I flushed, with a wave of excitement,

Fulfilling my fragile compassion...

I would pinch myself, but I was opulent,

Into the moment...

He kissed my lips, and my emotions liquefied With his...

We found a love of our own...

I produced Friends with the Butterflies and through love we survived.

I felt a feeling that I never knew,

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wealthy and healthy on a magic bus ride

but then,

The Bus driver announced that we had docked!
Next Stop The Blvd!

I pulled off my earbuds and Exited the Bus quietly, But still I enjoyed my Fantastic Fantasy!

I heard my heart whisper “baby I'm forever yours...”

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Discreetly, I fell in love on that Bus Ride...

P.s My Emotions & Me❤️

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    What a bus ride that was , enjoyed this . 🥰

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    So romantic! I love your work so much, Lonzo! ❤️

  • I love this take on love. My favorite line "I produced Friends with the Butterflies and through love we survived."

  • Like song lyrics you could listen to over and over. So well written, love the words you use.

  • Was the love in my mind, or was there a lover on the bus? Never-the-less, always the more. Still felt the magic. <3

  • Nikki3 years ago

    Great work!

  • Ohhh romance 😍

  • Jazmin Fernandez3 years ago

    Nice one :) I like it.

  • Kimmiekins43 years ago

    Love this🖤

  • What a wonderful poem!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Beautiful piece.

  • Awww, this was so so sweet!

  • Ah, the fantasies of the heart & the things they allow, if but only for a brief moment. As always, Lonzo, beautifully composed & expressed.

  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    Made me smile big time Lonzo! 😊💖

  • Quincy.V3 years ago

    This is a lovely and romantic piece of writing.

  • I like this! Fun read!

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