A Love Bus❤️
I was going for a conveyance, and I ended up being stuck inside a Fantastic Fantasy...
Dear Journal,
I fell in love on a Bus Ride.
I waited, at the Bus cessation,
For maybe 5 mins,
Before he arrived.
My heart, put up with an expedition.
It wasn't extensive, it was just a fantastic Fantasy...
He jigged back, and let me step forth willingly.
I glared, and he gave me a wink...
However I Dissemble to not see,
And I took a seat...
But he moved toward me and assumed a seat closer to me.
From the corner of my vision,
I felt his stare...
With it my mind, I wished to be anywhere,
As long as he was there...
He asked my name,
After the Staring game.
I flushed, with a wave of excitement,
Fulfilling my fragile compassion...
I would pinch myself, but I was opulent,
Into the moment...
He kissed my lips, and my emotions liquefied With his...
We found a love of our own...
I produced Friends with the Butterflies and through love we survived.
I felt a feeling that I never knew,
wealthy and healthy on a magic bus ride
but then,
The Bus driver announced that we had docked!
Next Stop The Blvd!
I pulled off my earbuds and Exited the Bus quietly, But still I enjoyed my Fantastic Fantasy!
I heard my heart whisper “baby I'm forever yours...”
Discreetly, I fell in love on that Bus Ride...
P.s My Emotions & Me❤️
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Comments (17)
What a bus ride that was , enjoyed this . 🥰
hats off to you!
So romantic! I love your work so much, Lonzo! ❤️
I love this take on love. My favorite line "I produced Friends with the Butterflies and through love we survived."
Like song lyrics you could listen to over and over. So well written, love the words you use.
Was the love in my mind, or was there a lover on the bus? Never-the-less, always the more. Still felt the magic. <3
Great work!
Ohhh romance 😍
Nice one :) I like it.
Love this🖤
What a wonderful poem!
Beautiful piece.
Awww, this was so so sweet!
Ah, the fantasies of the heart & the things they allow, if but only for a brief moment. As always, Lonzo, beautifully composed & expressed.
Made me smile big time Lonzo! 😊💖
This is a lovely and romantic piece of writing.
I like this! Fun read!