YOUR LIFE!!!!
PLEASE STOP TAKING YOUR LIFE!
It will change as you grow and YOU WILL CHANGE what you know
We NEVER stay the same. we are ALWAYS changing and liberating, and learning, and discerning, who WE CHOOSE to take up our space. YOU decide who's showing you grace. YOU decide whose love is true and whether their connection is elevating YOU. DO NOT SETTLE no matter what you were told. DON'T let self-doubt make your mind unfold. YOU HAVE THE POWER to heal and BE BOLD. STAND UP FOR YOURSELF and SPEAK YOUR TRUTH. Follow YOUR OWN PATH and BE YOUR OWN PROOF, that life is worth living NO MATTER HOW HARD, so give it all you got and let down your guard. I know the mental tries hard to take over but know that YOU HAVE MEANING and every day you get a do-over. And when you feel in that dark place, just be still and HOLD THAT SPACE. It's okay to not be okay, but that doesn't mean you should go away. That doesn't mean you should give up, RIDE IT OUT and see what's up. LIFE IS A JOURNEY, each stage is a gift, KEEP MOVING FORWARD thru all the rifts. SHINE YOUR OWN LIGHT and
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Hey there, I just read your poem and I have to say, it's really great! The way you play with words and use vivid imagery really draws the reader in and makes them feel like they're right there in the moment with you. Your writing has a certain rhythm and flow that's just mesmerizing. I can tell you put a lot of heart and soul into this piece, and it definitely shows. Speaking of poetry, I just published a new piece myself that I think you might enjoy. It's a bit different from what you've written here, but I think you'll appreciate the emotional depth and honesty that I've tried to convey. Check it out and let me know what you think - I always love getting feedback from other poets! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/love-s-lyrical-journey%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
Very sweet.
Awesome!
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Sweet, succinct and gorgeous. Well done, Mike!
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Lovely piece.