Poets logo

A Critique Of Haiku By Haiku

A Few Words

By Mike Singleton πŸ’œ Mikeydred Published about a year ago β€’ 1 min read

Introduction

I always feel so lazy sharing work like this, but it came to me while I was out walking on this frosty morning.

The music is Hoagy Carmichael's "Lazy Bones" by Leon Redbone which I am sure is how many see me 😸.

A Critique Of Haiku By Haiku

βœοΈπŸ“πŸ§ΎπŸ“βœοΈ

Lines Of A Haiku

Winter To Autumn, To Say

What Cannot Be Said

βœοΈπŸ“πŸ§ΎπŸ“βœοΈ

For FunHaikuhumor

About the Creator

Mike Singleton πŸ’œ Mikeydred

A Weaver of Tales and Poetry

Backup A/C

7 ֎ Fb ֎ β™«

In ֎ YT ֎ § ֎ BS

Glittering Fox Book

Vocal Ideas For You

Join & Share In VSS

Creationati

Call Me Les β™₯ Gina β™₯ Heather β™₯ Caroline β™₯

Dhar β™₯ Annie β™₯

Misty β™₯ Melissa β™₯ Ma Coombs β™₯

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments (7)

Sign in to comment
  • α”•α—©α—° α•Όα—©α–‡TYabout a year ago

    I like it! I wonder though since it is a Haiku about a Haiku is it also ARS Poetica (which is my favorite form) .....Things that make you go Hmmmm??

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Sounds perfect to me. Haiku a way to state a complex idea into simple words.

  • Chloe Gilholyabout a year ago

    I loved this, great thinking about haikus is that they say things normally unsaid.

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    This is great!! It should be a top story for sure!! I love the music and art!πŸ˜ŠπŸ’•πŸ’—

  • Daphsamabout a year ago

    Beautifully written!

  • Oooo, this was so deep and brilliant! I loved it!

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    That's what a haiku does....evokes and says what is left unsaid. A great haiku there.

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

Β© 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.