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A Challenge From Write Under The Moon

Spiritual awakening posted on medium.com

By Denise E LindquistPublished about a year ago 2 min read
A Challenge From Write Under The Moon
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I had heard of a “Spiritual awakening” but didn’t expect to have one

It wasn’t just one for me, but many

I haven’t ever thought of writing them until this prompt

I thought a different prompt might be fun

Writing Rupi Kaur’s and Jen Sincero’s prompts, not like I don’t have any

I am busy right now, and pretty swamped.

~

Struggling with sobriety when someone suggested asking for help

It was someone who believed in self-help

She said to ask to have the obsession and compulsion removed

For me, that worked. She was so right. It proved

to be true for me. No more drinking thinking

No more drinking

~

I wasn’t close to God or the Creator

I said, “Me, I’m an agnostic.

I want proof.”

If there is someone greater

How about a prognostic

Okay, I know I’m a goof.

~

Next, I was asking for a burning bush

Prove this to me I thought

For four days everywhere I went

People talked about cush

Good fortune, what they bought

Good luck, and what they were sent.

~

I overheard people talking about

how they found a 4 leaf clover

and then I saw a rainbow

We were riding in the car and no doubt

the end of the rainbow was right over

us and we were the fortune and had clout.

~

When my mom died, she told me

Pray for your siblings, I’m with God

I needed to hear that

She said the nickname only she

called me, and it wasn’t odd

at all. I was happy to have that chat!

~

A year later my sister died and she told me one morning

Time is different here, I can visit family

and friends, heaven, the ever-lasting happy place

and I can visit Valhalla, she told me without warning.

Where is Valhalla? A hall for warriors I was told happily.

It put my mind to rest. I was looking forward to that space.

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I have had many more, but this is enough for now

I will take a bow

enough for today

maybe more another day!

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Choose one of these in the new Non-Fiction (can be poetry) Mystical topic at the Moon:

1. Near-death experiences (NDE) 2. Ghost stories, hauntings, etc. 3. Out-of-body experiences (OBE) 4. Spiritual awakening. 5. Encounters with the unknown. 6. Encounters with family members who have passed away. 7. A serious illness that changed the course of your life. 8. Any unexplainable experience that caused a total shift in your life (i.e., changing your view on death and almost everything else). 9. Any “wake-up call” that ended up sending you in a new direction.

Tree Langdon challenge creator — due by the end of September.

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First published by Write Under the Moon on medium.com

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About the Creator

Denise E Lindquist

I am married with 7 children, 28 grands, and 13 great-grandchildren. I am a culture consultant part-time. I write A Poem a Day in February for 8 years now. I wrote 4 - 50,000 word stories in NaNoWriMo. I write on Vocal/Medium daily.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    This was veryyyyy interesting Denise!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Good work. This would be a good confession story too. I believe in heaven and that I will see all my family up there again some day, but I always have this feeling that when I die that I will be wandering around down here trying to help others somehow and most of that will be at my old school for some reason.

  • Kisha Walkerabout a year ago

    "No more drinking thinking..." Niiiiiiice! *Poetic Finger Snaps*

  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli about a year ago

    Spirit of your sister visited you. Yes I have had such experiences

  • Kayleigh Fraser ✨about a year ago

    This was a really great read 🙏🏻💎 I could write books on this prompt of the experience I have had… the spiritual life has become so normal that it’s hard to recall any other (and there for not so interesting for Mme to write- or so I thought until now 😅 I forget many people do not have their senses open like this and probably would find it interesting! )

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Love your family story!!! Superbly written!!!💕❤️❤️

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