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By Rowan Finley Published about 19 hours ago โ€ข 1 min read
Photo by Pramod Tiwari: https://www.pexels.com/photo/train-carriage-on-foggy-night-with-full-moon-13970797/

In the swing of night,

train sounds horn several times, thoroughly.

Playground remaining parts and swings rest,

desiring to be finished and ready.

A car spins its wheels at the dead-ended-road, as an escape route must be made.

A bold cricket harps his steady pitch.

Literature lingers, as stacks of dusty papers in mindโ€™s grazing munch.

There must be order in the court of unstoppable inspiration, surely?

Or, does it stay awake to all hours of the sounding night and past-seen-imagery of the day lived?

surreal poetryStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Komalabout 13 hours ago

    Ooo, this is quietly powerful! Makes me feel like this was written in that exact moment when the world is asleep but your mind is throwing a creative house party. And you justโ€ฆ opened the door and let it happen.

  • Archery Owlabout 13 hours ago

    I like the phrase โ€œin the swing of nightโ€ it suggest a shift in atmosphere, which is nicely juxtaposed with the mind that continues to graze ๐Ÿ„ ๐Ÿ›ค๏ธ ๐Ÿ“ƒ

  • Colleen Waltersabout 19 hours ago

    It's amazing how air moisture magnifies sounds exponentially... and some of those trains have such shrill horns- " train sounds horn several times, thoroughly" I can hear it from here lol ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ‘€

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