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Not a Hero" — Ironic and impactful, reflecting the moral ambiguity.

“One life saved. One taken. Who decides what’s right

By UzairkhanPublished 8 months ago 3 min read

His mother’s breathing machine beeped rhythmically in the dim hospital room, its sound both a comfort and a warning. Every breath she took cost money. Money he didn’t have. Publishers had stopped replying. Friends stopped lending. Life had stopped giving.

On the third night without sleep, Ali sat in the hospital corridor, head bowed, when a man in a crisp black suit sat beside him. No footsteps. No sound. Just... there.

“I can help,” the man said.

Ali didn’t look up. “Unless you’re from the Zakat office or a miracle worker, don’t waste my time.”

“I’m something in between.”

Ali turned. The man’s face was... off. Smooth, symmetrical, forgettable. Like a photo slightly blurred to hide identity. His smile, however, was sharp.

“Your mother’s treatment. The bills. All of it, gone,” the man said, sliding a folder onto Ali’s lap.

Ali opened it. Hospital receipts. Insurance clearance. Bank statements. All showing massive deposits. His name on them.

“What is this?” he whispered.

“A preview.”

“There’s always a catch.”

The man leaned in. “There is. You do one thing for me. Just one.”

Ali swallowed. “What?”

“You take a life.”

Ali recoiled.

“No questions. I’ll give you the name, the place. Do it. Or don’t. But decide by dawn.”

“Why me?”

“You're desperate. And capable.”

With that, the man stood and walked away, vanishing down the sterile hallway like smoke.

Ali didn’t sleep that night.

At 4 a.m., he opened the envelope the man had left on the bench. Inside: a photo of a middle-aged man, an address, and one word written in bold red ink: Tonight.

---

Ali stood outside the apartment building, hands trembling inside his coat. He had bought a knife — not a gun. Guns made it real. Knives could be accidents. Could be survival.

The apartment door was unlocked.

Inside, the man from the photo snored on a recliner, beer bottles scattered like trash. A cricket match played muted on TV. No photos. No family.

Ali stepped closer. He told himself: maybe he’s a criminal. Maybe he deserves it.

But what if he didn’t?

His mother’s face flashed in his mind. Her hands, once strong, now skeletal and cold.

The knife did what it was told.

Ali walked out with blood on his hands and an unbearable silence in his ears.

---

Two days later, his mother was moved to a private room. The doctors called it a miracle. The debts vanished. Publishers reached out suddenly, interested in his “raw perspective.”

Then came the news.

The man he’d killed was revealed to be a wanted human trafficker. Children. Girls. Years of abuse.

Ali stared at the TV, disbelief sinking in. The media hailed the “mystery avenger.” The public demanded justice for more like him. Ali should have felt relief. Maybe pride.

He felt... nothing.

Until the man in black returned.

Same seat. Same silence.

“You did well,” he said.

Ali didn’t respond.

The man placed a new envelope on his lap.

“I don’t want it,” Ali said.

“But the world does,” the man whispered. “You didn’t kill an innocent. You delivered justice.”

“That doesn’t make me clean.”

“No. It makes you useful.”

Ali looked down at the envelope. It felt heavier this time.

"Another monster?"

"Does it matter?" the man replied. "You’ve already decided what kind of man you are."

Ali stood up, walked away, left the envelope unopened.

But that night, curiosity gnawed. At 2 a.m., he opened it.

A new name. A new face.

This time, a woman. A judge.

Ali didn’t sleep.

---

Ending:

The next morning, the man in black waited in the corridor again. Ali sat beside him, silent for a long time.

Finally, he asked, “If I say no?”

The man smiled, wider than before. “Then I’ll find someone else. But you’ll never know what she’s done. Or what she will do.”

Ali stared ahead.

The beeping of his mother’s machine faded behind him.

He reached for the envelope.

“You’re not a hero, Ali,” the man said as he stood. “You’re just finally becoming honest with yourself.”Moral:“When you cross a line for a good reason, it doesn't erase the blood on your hands — it just makes it easier to cross the next one.”

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“Even justice can corrupt if it comes without conscience.”

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