
There was only one rule: don’t open the door. At least that was this week’s rule. Last week the rule was: only eat the red berries and the rule the week before was only walk on the even numbered side of the corridor. Every week our masters devised a new rule for us to follow and a new punishment to be administered if the latest rule was broken. Just to keep life as confusing as possible various old rules were randomly discarded only to be reinstated at a future time. There was only one rule that the master’s would never cancel. Under penalty of excruciating torture and death would anyone be allowed to open the door at the far end of the galley way.
It would have been easier to enforce that rule if along with the edict came an explanation as to why it was so important that the door remain closed. Humans are by nature a curious animal. If we are told something is forbidden but not offered a plausible explanation as to why, we will ignore the rule. It was this total lack of understanding of the human psyche that created the disaster.
When the human cargo was beamed aboard the year was 1313. Beings from other planets, traveling among the stars, and the vacuum of space had never been dreamed of. The Ploutonion’s needed laborers for their mines and these creatures filled their needs. They never expected that a band of renegade humans would do the very thing they were instructed not to do, and force open the door depressurizing the ship. Now humans and Ploutonions are floating lifelessly in the vastness of space. Only the rules of physics applied.
About the Creator
Mark Gagnon
My life has been spent traveling here and abroad. Now it's time to write.
I have three published books: Mitigating Circumstances, Short Stories for Open Minds, and Short Stories from an Untethered Mind. Unmitigated Greed is do out soon.
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Comments (17)
One of the best ones so far! Good luck 😁
Oh... and interesting concept you've introduced here Mark!! Very intriguing!!
They should have used a better lock on that door! ‘Nother great out of the box challenge entry, Mark!
This was delightful. Great work. Loved how different this was.
Obsessed with this line: "If we are told something is forbidden but not offered a plausible explanation as to why, we will ignore the rule." Great entry!
Wow! Mark, that was a twist. If they were a higher life form, wouldn't they know humans can't be trusted? 😂
Such a compelling read! There's so much to this world in such a small space. I loved it!
I love how much story there is.... only to end in physics. It just feels like a bottom line that is completely believable.
Hahahahahahaha I can see myself opening that door and going "Oops!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Loved your story!
Humans! Such rulebreakers!
Nice! I love he sci-fi angle.
Awesome entry, Mark! I loved how you built the atmosphere so quickly. And like JBaz said, it would be interesting to see this in a longer format! And you're right! Humans are a curious animal. Sometimes too curious.
I like th sci fi take on this challenge. And a great story. I w ish it could have been longer, I think you are on to a bigger tale
Pesky humans. They should just do as they’re told! Love this!
You have treated of the perennially pertinent theme of hazardous curiosity with skill and style once again!
That made a wonderful mini sci-fi/horror!
I'm looking forward to your next story.