The Door Of Prejudice
The Greatest Fear Of Empath
"There was only one rule: don’t open the door.”
Marie White and T. Corl open a shady business. They overcharge their customer and treat them like dirt, especially minority Customers.
They spied on the customers to try to pull them down and make them poorer.
They entice their customers with sweet services. Their investment company was to attract gullible minorities who want to be rich fast and need a vehicle.
Wilma needed a car two years ago. Marie and T. gave her a good deal on a car. They hired a man named Dave to spy on her 24/7. Dave seduced Wilma to be his girlfriend so it was easy to spy on her.
Wilma was going to receive a large inheritance from her grandparents, but the investment found out and forged Wilma's signature and took her inheritance.
Wilma was going to be able to pay her car off in two months, but it was repossessed.
She was told she had to pay triple the loan amount, to get her car back. She got her friend to help her pay for it. They told her the car was auctioned off.
Wilma went to the DMV and the plates of her car were turned in the day it was repossessed.
Dave felt sorry for Wilma and knew what would happen to her.
" Whatever you do, Wilma, please do not open the door in the back of the investment building when they tell you someone can help you in that office," Dave warned her.
Wilma did not know what to do, she was already fearful of what would happen if she did not obey the investment company.
" Please sign this paper and do not read it. Take it to that door." Marie pointed to the back office door.
About the Creator
Mariann Carroll
Proactive for positive change.Born in the City of Chicago ,Illinois.
Multi race .Studied in a foreign country .Fluent in several languages .
fascinated by diversity.A Romantic and a dreamer.Interest in healthy living
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Comments (9)
The characters are intriguing, particularly the morally ambiguous Dave, caught between loyalty and conscience. The plotline is rich with potential for twists and turns, and the reader is immediately drawn into the suspenseful narrative. The themes of greed, deception, and the consequences of trusting the wrong people are timeless and relevant. Awesome!!!👍✨
So many shady doings lately, this felt real!
well written, an amazing story👌
Poor Wilma. That investment company is the worst
My heart breaks for Wilma. Your story is such a true reflection of how people are getting cheated.
I wonder what lies beyond that door. Gate to hell...we never know
This was a monstrous tale of deceitful bigotry that haunts us all. Intense!
WOW! That was phenomenal storytelling Mariann! BRAVO! The deceivers will eventually reap what they sow!
Ooh. Hope she didn't open it! And that Marie gets caught! And this was a refreshing take on the challenge!