The Bouncy Castle
For A True Crime, Horror Story & Dark Poetry Challenge

This is in response to Dharrsheena's challenge in True Crime, Horror Story & Dark Poetry here
It's time for another #WritingChallenge ! Based on the prompt below, you can write either a #story or #poem that includes a funeral, a bouncy house and lifeless body/bodies. Make it as twisted and as creepy as you can!

I included "Merry Go Round" by Wild Man Fischer as music for this as for me it has an edgy creepiness. Frank Zappa once told a story about Larry Fisher meeting his brother. "His brother had the bad luck, Larry had the axe" a little dark humour for you there. I don't know if it really happened but Larry could be unstable. You can listen to him on the album below.
The Attraction
âMom, can I go to Mr Jeffreyâs Bouncy Castle Play Centre? My friends said they had heard it was amazingâ
âAre your friends going?â
âNo, I think they must be away, but loads of kids really say itâs brilliant, and you meet lots of new friends thereâ
âIâm not sure about you going on your ownâ
âAw mom, you can take me, and stay and watch as wellâ
âI have a Spa appointment and some beauty treatments which will take a few hours this afternoon. What time is Mr Jeffreyâs open?â
âHeâs always open. Please Mom can I go?â
âAlright, have your breakfast, clean your room, and I will drop you off after lunchâ
âAw Mom, thank you, I canât wait, the Bouncy Castle is amazing, everyone saysâ
Mr Jeffreyâs Bouncy Castle Play Centre
She dropped him off at the entrance and had given him ten dollars. She told him she would pick him up in two hours, he gave her a hug and thanked her and ran to the entrance.
There was no one taking payment but the gate was open so he went in and then saw the bouncy castle, and heard the pump going so he ran and jumped on. He was the only one there which meant he could jump and run as much as he wanted.
The construction of the Bouncy Castle was a little unusual, it was a definite castle, but was not the normal, plastic/rubber single-piece design but was a stitched-together patchwork. He was in his element, bouncing, bouncing and bouncing.
He decided to have a rest and look around, there was a little petting zoo with some pigs, goats and sheep, and another shed that was secured. There was no one else around, but he wasnât too bothered, he could always play alone.
He went back to the Bouncy Castle and bounced, played and jumped, until âŠâŠ.
The Pick-Up
She was a bit late but pulled up outside Mister Jeffereyâs place to pick up her son. It looked very quiet. She walked in and saw the Bouncy Castle which was unoccupied, but she thought she saw some red, but it was probably just the afternoon light which was fading., and the sodium street lamps were coming on. She really was a bit too late.
âHelloâ
She jumped, the man was dressed in handymanâs clothes and had a toolbox.
âOh sorry, Iâve come to pick up my son, he had been pestering me to come and play on your bouncy castle and said his friends had been telling him how wonderful it wasâ
âOh yes it is a truly amazing labour of love that I started a few years agoâ
âWonderful, so where is my son, we need to get home now as he has some important exams at school tomorrowâ
âHeâs in the Bouncy Castleâ
She looked again and could see no one on the bouncy Castle, it was empty and still.
âBut there is no on there on the Bouncy Castleâ
âI said he is IN the Bouncy Castle, he is there with his friends, well his skin isâ
She froze in shock
âAnd his body went through the grinder in the shed to feed the animals in the petting zoo, the pigs particularly love the meat. Ironic considering human meat tastes like pork. I do keep some for myself, sometimes, and you look particularly tasty and will make a good addition to the bouncy Castleâ
The next thing is something hit her and it all went black.
And So It Goes
Mr Jefferey had meat in the freezer, a new car and the pigs were well-fed.
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Comments (6)
ooooh! Good one! đ (And so deliciously told!
Wow thatâs creepy lol
Whoaaaaaa! I absolutely loved this! It reminded me a lot about the serial killer Ed Gein. He made furniture and objects using human skin, lol! But I never thought your story would go in that direction and I loved that twist! Absolutely brilliant!
Great job, Mike! You definitely nailed the âdisturbingâ part.
Very interesting and well written.
Oh snap!!!!! Well you put the freak in freak-yyyyy!!! Great work with the prompt. You always come up with such original ideas :)