"There was only one rule: don’t open the door. Let me clarify that last statement. Don't open the wrong door."
Winston Thrope III stood on a balcony above eight dishevelled people who gathered in the dome. "There are thirty-two doors but only one exit. Therefore, one person shall leave here alive. You will take turns opening them one at a time, your shirts are tagged with the designated order."
Number three yelled. "What the Fuck is this bullshit, I'm not playing your fucking game." And with that he walked to the nearest door and opened it. His body was ripped apart before their eyes. Blood and pieces of gelatine like matter soaked into the sandy floor.
Cutting through the hysterical screams Winstons voice rang out. "Now, that is a shame. The game has not yet begun and already we are down one."
As pandemonium ensued below, Winston shook his head in frustration. "People, please try to act civil, this is a gentlemen’s game after all. We added an extra incentive in case you don’t wish to participate.”
The upper dome lights burst on, displaying children, alive but crucified to crosses. “Should you refuse, we pick a door and your child will be placed in front of it.”
One of the spectators who stood with Winston shouted. "This is an outrage, my champion has been eliminated before we began, I demand to choose another."
While the others laughed, Winston shook his head. "I am terribly sorry Montague, rules are rules."
Winston continued. "We shall commence shortly. You will have one minute to choose a door and continue until there is a winner, who shall be allowed to leave with their child. The remaining survivors, if any, will remain for the next round. Now, let the fun begin."
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Comments (14)
Bloody terrifying. This may be the most visceral and terrifying submission I have read. It makes Squid Games seem tame. Excellent work JBaz!
I think I like this game. It might have the squid game run for it's money. Good luck for the challenge.
the introduction of this story says it all, the first rule don't open the door... clarity don't open the wrong door that really set the tune for the story ahead well done
Gory and disturbing! The gelatin-like matter did for me 🤯
This gives squid games vibes but a lot more gruesome!! Love it Jason!! I'd take another episode of this, hands down!!
THIS - is terrifying but so very brilliant!
This is horrific on several levels! A brilliant entry, JBaz!
This is take no prisoner horror, Jason! I think I need to lie down a bit now before I pass out.😳
Oooo, this reminded me about Squid Games! Also, I loveeeeee how you added children in this mix hehehehehe
Nice concept! First humans for sport type scenario I'd seen. Realistic horror. Very nice touch with the paragraph line.
This is incredibly terrifying. A winner in my eyes. Good luck.
And just when you survive round 1 you get to participate in round 2. You are a devious soul, Jason. What a great concept!
Brutal. So much nastiness in this, JBaz. The stuff of parental nightmares!
Man, this one is on a whole new level! Excellent story, my friend!