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The Hourglass in the Dead Man's Pocket

Every Grain Holds a Scream

By Ahmed AbdeenPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

Prologue: The Whisper of Fate

The wallet lay abandoned on the rain-slicked pavement, its leather cracked like old bones. Samuel Carter hesitated—something about the way its edges curled inward, as if clutching a secret, made his skin prickle. Inside, he found nothing but a rusted keychain and an hourglass small enough to cradle in his palm. The glass was warm, almost alive. Then he saw the note.

“If you’re reading this… you have 24 hours to save what’s left of your soul.”

The words, scrawled in what looked like dried blood, blurred as a woman’s voice cut through the fog behind him:

“The clock starts now… and your son will be the first victim.”

When he turned, the street was empty. But the hourglass had already flipped.

Chapter 1: The Ghosts in the Glass

Jacob’s laughter echoed through the house—a sound Samuel hadn’t heard in years. His 16-year-old son sat cross-legged on the floor, assembling a puzzle of jagged black pieces. “Dad,” Jacob said without looking up, “why does the sand sound like screaming?”

Samuel froze. The hourglass sat on the mantel, its crimson grains hissing as they fell.

Three knocks rattled the door.

Detective Naomi West stood in the downpour, her badge glinting like a threat. “We found a body,” she said, eyes lingering on the hourglass behind him. “He had your name in his pocket.”

The victim’s face on her phone screen punched the air from Samuel’s lungs. Dr. Everett. His psychiatrist. The man who’d treated him a decade ago—after the fire.

Chapter 2: The Fractured Past

The microchip was hidden inside the hourglass, taped beneath a false bottom. Samuel plugged it into his laptop, and Dr. Everett’s voice oozed from the speakers:

“Patient S.C. exhibits dissociative episodes… believes he caused the fire that killed his parents… delusions of a ‘shadow child’…”

But Samuel had no memory of these sessions.

Jacob’s door was ajar. Inside, the boy scribbled madly on the walls—“THEY’RE IN THE MIRRORS”—in red marker. When he turned, his eyes were voids. “She’s lying, Dad. The detective has the snake on her wrist too.”

Chapter 3: The Serpent’s Mark

Naomi’s sleeve slipped as she handed Samuel a file. The tattoo coiled around her wrist—a serpent swallowing its tail—matched the one etched into Dr. Everett’s corpse.

“Your son’s school called,” she said, too calmly. “He never arrived today.”

Samuel’s phone buzzed. A video loaded: Jacob bound to a chair, gagged, in a room with yellow-flowered wallpaper. His childhood bedroom. The one that burned to ash.

A message flickered:

“TELL THE TRUTH OR HE DROWNS IN THE SAND.”

Chapter 4: The Boy in the Walls

Jacob’s dissociative episodes began at age 8—the same age Samuel was when the fire stole his family. Doctors called it “inherited trauma.” But now, watching the video again, Samuel noticed details only Jacob would know: the crack in the closet door, the stuffed owl on the bed.

This wasn’t a copycat. This was a confession.

Naomi cornered him at the morgue. “Your report killed my father,” she hissed, shoving a document in his face—a falsified autopsy from 10 years ago. Samuel’s signature bled across the bottom. “You said he jumped. But you pushed him.”

Chapter 5: The Second Hourglass

The safehouse reeked of burnt sugar. Naomi’s gun trembled as she gestured to a woman chained to the wall—Lena, Samuel’s ex-wife, missing for 7 years. “Jacob made a deal,” Naomi spat. “His life for hers. But the hourglass wasn’t counting to his death. It was counting to YOURS.”

Samuel’s hands shook as he smashed the hourglass against the floor.

“Dad, I’m inside it!” Jacob’s scream tore through the room.

In the shattered glass, Samuel saw it—his son’s face, warped and screaming, disintegrating grain by grain as the sand swallowed him.

Epilogue: The Children of Time

The police found Samuel kneeling in the rubble, clutching a handful of bloodied sand. Naomi and Lena were gone.

But on cold nights, he hears it—the whisper of falling sand. And in the mirror, Jacob’s shadow smiles, its lips sewn shut with crimson thread.

Some say the hourglass reforms at midnight, hungry for new souls.

Some say Jacob’s still counting.

Final Line:

“In the silence between seconds, the sand remembers.”

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Ahmed Abdeen

An experienced article publisher and writer specializing in creating high-quality, engaging, and well-researched content tailored to captivate diverse audiences. Adept at crafting compelling narratives

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  • Ripon Ahmed9 months ago

    wow

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