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"The Curse of Sheikh Fawzi: A Human Wish... and a Devil’s Price!"

"He Wrote His Wish in Blood… But the Price Was a Soul He Couldn’t Lose!"

By Ahmed AbdeenPublished 10 months ago 3 min read
"The Curse Awaits"

Chapter 1: The Quest for Glory (A Clear Goal + Rising Tension)

Time: Summer 2023, peak excavation season in Giza.

Primary Goal: British archaeologist Dr. Arthur MacAllister searches for the lost tomb of Amenhotep III, rumored to hold treasures that could rewrite Egypt’s history.

Key Characters:

Arthur (50): Ambitious, arrogant, believes only in science.

Carlos (30): Mexican tech expert, sarcastic, loves money.

Opening Scene (Sensory Overload):

The Desert: A scorching inferno. The sun melts plastic water bottles, and the air shimmers like a mirage.

The Workers: Ten Egyptian laborers, their faces carved with wrinkles like ancient olive trees, haul water from a crumbling well. Their white gallabiyas are stained yellow with sweat and sand.

Critical Dialogue:

Worker Mohamed (whispers to his friend): "The garden beneath the sand won’t open… Sheikh Fawzi will be angry!"

Carlos (overhearing, laughing): "We’re digging for a pharaoh’s tomb, not chasing your ghosts, old man!"

Chapter 2: The Legend of Sheikh Fawzi (From Mockery to Curiosity)

The Trigger:

While digging, the team uncovers a clay jar stuffed with gold flakes… inscribed with:

"Visit Sheikh Fawzi’s shrine… and find what stuns the mind!"

Arthur (scoffing): "Maybe the ‘Sheikh’ was a thief hiding loot!"

The Fateful Visit:

The Shrine: A cave carved into a lone boulder, resembling a sleeping beast’s maw.

Inside:

The Statue: A woman with emerald eyes… her lower half a scorpion, tail poised to strike.

Inscriptions: "Write your wish in blood… take what you desire… but the price will destroy you!"

Carlos (mocking): "I’m Sheikh Fawzi… give me your pinky finger, and I’ll grant you riches!"

Chapter 3: The Joke That Became a Nightmare (Horror Begins)

A Drop of Blood, A Door to Hell:

Arthur (smearing blood from a cut onto the inscription): "I wish for Amenhotep’s treasure… where’s my gift?"

The Result: The ground trembles… a hidden door creaks open behind the statue!

The Gruesome Discovery:

The Chamber:

12 Skeletons: Seated around a stone table… skulls hollowed out, brains missing.

A Black Manuscript: Open to a page reading: "Your wish is granted… name the sacrifice!"

Carlos (nervously laughing): "This… this is just a prank, right?"

Chapter 4: The Devil’s Bargain (Suspense Peaks)

Blood Calls to Blood:

Arthur’s Daughter, Emily (on a crackling phone call): "Dad… there’s a stranger in my room!"

Arthur (terrified): "Emily, lock the door—" The line dies… followed by the sound of claws scraping glass.

The Ultimatum:

New Inscriptions appear on the wall:

"Sacrifice: Emily… or Carlos… Choose now!"

The Scorpion-Woman’s Shadow creeps toward Emily’s photo in Arthur’s wallet.

Chapter 5: The Choice (Emotional Climax)

A Father’s Desperation:

Arthur (staring at Carlos, asleep): "He’s just an assistant… but Emily is my life!"

The Shadow (hissing in his ear): "Choose… or I will!"

The Sacrifice:

Arthur (plunges a dagger into Carlos): "The curse ends now… right?"

Carlos (dying): "Blood… won’t satisfy them… they’ll return…"

Chapter 6: The End… or the Beginning? (Shocking Twist)

The Final Trick:

Emily suddenly arrives at the site… removes her hijab… revealing black scorpions sprouting from her scalp!

The Last Inscription: "13th sacrifice… complete."

The Final Scene:

Arthur collapses… as Emily-the-Scorpion whispers:

"Find the 14th sacrifice… or I’ll devour your real daughter!"

Epilogue: The Curse Spreads (Sequel Hook)

A Japanese tourist who aided Arthur posts a TikTok video:

"Look what I found in Giza—gold jars and a weird fork!"

In the background… a scorpion shadow creeps toward his shoulder.

"The curse hasn’t ended… it awaits its next victim. Will it be you?"

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#GizaMysteries #HumanSacrifice #CursedArtifact #DarkEgypt #HorrorCommunity

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About the Creator

Ahmed Abdeen

An experienced article publisher and writer specializing in creating high-quality, engaging, and well-researched content tailored to captivate diverse audiences. Adept at crafting compelling narratives

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  • eljoker paints9 months ago

    wow

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