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What the Dickens...?

A Story Every Day in 2024 Dec 18th ?/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished about a year ago 2 min read
What the Dickens...?
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It was a bitter night. Wind penetrated the house, making it gasp and groan, windows rattling in fear of shattering.

She sat meditatively in the red wingback chair, the fire's blaze warming and scorching. She was exhausted and grateful for the chance to stop. She could not fully relax though, the storm pulling at her consciousness, as the logs spit. She picked up her knitting.

Lights flickered overhead.

Not a powercut! she thought. They were merely teasing.

She started her row, relaxing into the rhythm, lulled.

Her meditative pastime was broken by two clearly delivered knocks. There was no mistaking them. They were resolute; precise.

She started. Who could this be? She was not expecting anyone. It was late, hostile. Only the brave or the lost would be abroad this night. Tentatively, she put down her knitting and went to the door. Open it? Or ignore it? She thought of scenarios: someone needing help? She should let them in. But what if they wanted to harm her? She was vulnerable and alone.

She looked through her peephole. She turned on the light to the porch but it must have blown. She could see a figure: nothing more. The wind was obliterating all sound except the pronounced double knock. The figure's hand raised itself again and the door reverberated as his hand connected.

What strangeness was this?

"Who is it?" she called, chilled. If they answered, their words were soft or those easily whisked away by the wind.

Knock. Knock.

"Who are you?" she whispered. If she expected an answer, none came.

Was it the wind that urged Open the door! Because that's what she found herself doing.

The lock snapped. The rattling chain echoed into the night. The door creaked as she pulled it towards her and the wind rushed in excitedly.

"Hello?" she asked tentatively.

The figure remained in the dark but spoke:

"Mistress Deeming?"

Mistress? Where are we? Victorian Britain? she thought, scathingly.

It was wise that she did not utter these words out loud as before her, looking mightily pissed off was Charles Dickens.

"May I come in?" he asked, politely but sharply. "I have a matter I would like to discuss."

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366 words

This is a sister piece to what I wrote yesterday as I mused on how Dickens would feel about my interpretation of his character. A visitation from a ghost seemed apt somehow.

Yesterday's piece:

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Rachel Deeming

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶about a year ago

    Great build up of tension… not sure I would have answered the door… ‘ax-murderers are typically the only ones abroad in such weather 😳.

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Hahaha. Don't be nervous. I'm sure he's there to give you his blessing. Creative work, Rachel. I guess I should go read the first part now, lol.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Haha! Love the title and how this extended from your earlier piece! Quite the absurd scene you’ve managed to construct

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    haha - this was so clever. Can you imagine if all authors and musicians could come back and haunt you?!? 😳

  • J. L. Greenabout a year ago

    Ooo I love the vibes of this! Clever clever :)

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    The ghost of Christmas Pardon-Me-Miss-But... Well-wrought!

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    This is so bloody clever, Rachel! A haunting of one ghost or four like Scrooge? (I always count Marley, which is only fair even though he’s not Christmas themed like the three). Can’t wait for the next chapter!

  • Hahahahahahhahahaha despite the title, I still did not see that coming! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Katarzyna Popielabout a year ago

    But of course he comes to congratulate you on your brilliant attempt at helping his characters remain alive in the public consciousness! I just hope he won't demand royalties...

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Well he may have a well deserved reason to be a tad bit cranky with you. Ha ha Well done

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Yes, Mistress Deeming? What matter will he discuss with you? Looking forward to more of Charles!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    OMG....I'm still laughing........this is so good a follow up to our brief comments on the artful dodger piece. Maybe you weren't quite as artful as we thought with dodging that law suit....On another note, my British friend, I am a huge Dickens fan and Christmas Carol has always been one of my absolute favorites. This piece was so well written and so captivating. I wanted more, more, and more.......

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    So creative...I love the snarky mental narration. Congrats on your one a day task...very impressive

  • Gerard DiLeoabout a year ago

    Uh-oh. The Ghost of Christmas...um...Something!

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