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Two Runs too Many

A subzero night at the slopes

By John CoxPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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Okay, safety first people! Take no more than two runs before returning to the Chalet. I don't want any frost bite on my watch!

The snow, packed and hard, squeaked under our booted feet. Eager to get to the slopes we strapped on our ski's and began to herringbone toward the lift. Soon we were aloft, already feeling the bitter cold penetrate our heavy gloves.

Darkness had fallen once we reached the top, lights eerily illuminating the white slopes. Soon we raced happily down the hill, gliding and turning, vaulting off moguls as our skis pounded across its packed surface. Reaching bottom, we boarded the lift and quickly made our second run.

At the bottom, we stacked our skis and retreated to the chalet, our fingertips already numb. Ten minutes later we went back out to the slopes.

But after an hour passed with barely thirty minutes of skiing, I stayed for two additional runs before returning to the chalet. As I removed my gloves, they fell helplessly to the floor.

Completely numb, my hands felt as though increased in size ten-fold while still appearing normal. And then the pain began, the flaming, shrieking experience of the blood flowing back into my fingers as I bit my tongue to keep from crying out.

I wretchedly paced the floor for twenty minutes, tears involuntarily sliding down my cheeks until the pain finally reduced to a whimper. This is it, I thought sadly.

We're going back out. You coming?

Right behind you!

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Twisted teller of mind bending tales. I never met a myth I didn't love or a subject that I couldn't twist out of joint. I have a little something for almost everyone here. Cept AI. Aint got none of that.

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  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Fantastic & loved it!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Ouch!! Great take on teh challenge, excellent work

  • Anna 2 years ago

    No way... please tell me this ain't true story Don't get me wrong, fabulous fiction!!!!🥰

  • Gosh that seems soooooo painful but why would anyone wanna do it all over again? 😅😅😅 Loved your story and art!

  • John, you have a brilliant knack for bringing places and people alive. I have never been on snow skis but I felt like I was out there with your character. And I'm beginning to drop everything I'm doing to check out your art work. You are awesome! What medium is the ski pic? Chalk?

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    John, with all the snowy places I've lived, I never learned to ski. I loved the "herringbone" description of walking to the lift. Gosh don't the ski gloves keep the hands warm? And OF COURSE you would go back out!! Great story! (I think you should put your name on your drawings - Artwork by J.R.Cox, Story Author - or...)

  • Toby Heward2 years ago

    Quite the twist at the end

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    We call it "agony cold". It is awful but the skiing? Such fun! This was a great description of skiing!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Ha ha! We have all been there, whether it's skiing or snowball fights.

  • Night skiing was always the best--& we were always pretty much just like this (though perhaps dressed a little more warmly--we were there for the fun, not to look good, lol).

  • Thank you for reading.

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