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The Veil of Eternity

A Touch That Rewrites Reality

By The Universal PenPublished 10 months ago 5 min read

Part 1: The Discovery of a Lost World

The jungle was thick, the air heavy with the smell of damp earth and decaying foliage. Ryan Carter hacked his way through the dense underbrush, his machete cutting through vines and twisted branches with practiced ease. His sweat-soaked shirt clung to his back, but it didn’t matter. He’d traveled miles into the heart of the Amazon, far beyond any tourist path, driven by the promise of a discovery that could change everything.

For years, Ryan had chased stories of ancient civilizations lost to time—legends of temples buried deep within the earth, and artifacts rumored to hold powers far beyond human understanding. But nothing had ever truly felt like more than a tall tale, a myth. Until now.

He had been given a map—old, brittle, with markings that had been partially faded by time—but it was enough. After months of searching, of trekking through jungles and crossing dangerous rivers, he was finally standing at the entrance of what appeared to be an ancient temple. A forgotten ruin hidden by centuries of dense foliage. It had all the signs of a major discovery, one that could cement his name in the annals of archaeology.

But as he stood before the moss-covered stone steps, the hairs on the back of his neck prickled with a strange sense of unease. The air felt still—too still. The sounds of the jungle were muted here, as if even the birds and insects were holding their breath.

"Here it is," he muttered to himself, running his fingers over the carvings that decorated the entrance.

The temple loomed before him, its stone façade intricately designed with images of strange creatures and celestial symbols. Something about it felt... off. But Ryan had been trained to ignore the feeling of unease. It was the price of discovery.

He stepped forward, pushing through the vines that had overgrown the entrance, and found himself in a dark corridor. The light from his torch flickered against the walls, casting long shadows across the stone floor.

"Let's see what secrets you’re hiding," he whispered under his breath.

As he ventured deeper into the temple, the air grew cooler, and the sense of foreboding intensified. The walls here were even more detailed, with carvings that seemed to shift as the torchlight passed over them. Depictions of strange beings—humanoid figures with elongated limbs and eyes that seemed too large for their faces—stared back at him. He felt as though they were watching him, following his every movement.

It wasn’t until he reached the center of the temple that he found what he had been searching for. It was a pedestal, raised on a stone platform in the middle of a vast chamber. Upon it rested a large, shimmering object—almost like fabric, but not quite. The light from his torch glinted off the surface, revealing an ethereal, translucent veil that seemed to ripple and shift, like liquid.

Ryan’s heart skipped a beat. This was it. The object before him was unlike anything he had ever seen—no ancient relic, no forgotten treasure, but something more—a tangible piece of mystery.

He approached cautiously, his breath catching in his throat. He couldn’t explain why, but something about the veil called to him. It was as though it had been waiting for him, its very existence tied to his own. His fingers itched to touch it, to unravel the mystery that had led him here.

Without thinking, he extended his hand, his fingers brushing against the surface of the Veil of Eternity.

The moment his skin made contact, the air around him seemed to shimmer. A cold rush of wind swept through the chamber, extinguishing his torch in an instant. Darkness engulfed him, and for a split second, Ryan thought he might have passed out.

Then, everything changed.

The ground beneath his feet seemed to shift, and the world around him warped. The walls of the temple dissolved, replaced by a sky—no, a sky unlike anything he had ever seen. It was a chaotic swirl of colors—vivid purples and blues, fiery oranges and reds—like a painting in motion.

Ryan stumbled backward, disoriented, his heart pounding in his chest. His eyes darted around, trying to make sense of his surroundings. But there was no ground beneath him. No temple. No jungle. Just a vast, empty space that stretched on forever.

He reached out instinctively, his hand grasping at the air. His fingers brushed something cold, like glass, but solid. The space around him flickered again, and a new image began to take shape.

Before him stood a massive stone gate, towering high into the sky, surrounded by swirling clouds. The gate pulsed with an eerie light, and the symbols carved into its surface matched the ones he had seen in the temple.

His breath caught in his throat. This was impossible. He wasn’t in the temple anymore. He wasn’t even in the jungle.

"Where am I?" he whispered, his voice barely audible against the roar of the shifting reality around him.

The Veil... had done something to him. Something he couldn’t comprehend.

As if on cue, a voice echoed through the void, deep and resonant, as though it were speaking directly into his mind.

"You have entered the Threshold," it said.

Ryan’s mind raced, his heart thumping in his chest. The Threshold? What was that? He turned in circles, searching for the source of the voice, but found no one.

Then, as quickly as it had appeared, the voice faded, leaving him in silence.

Ryan’s mind was a whirlwind of thoughts. How had this happened? What had he activated by touching the Veil? Was this even real? His fingers brushed the edge of the Veil again, but it offered no answers.

He stepped forward, cautiously approaching the stone gate. It pulsed again, as if inviting him to pass through. He hesitated, unsure of what lay beyond it, but something urged him forward—a sense of destiny, a pull he couldn’t ignore.

It was then that he heard a rustling behind him. Whipping around, Ryan saw something moving in the distance—dark shapes, shifting in and out of the mist. Figures, humanoid in shape, but their movements were erratic, unnatural.

Ryan’s heart skipped a beat as one of them stepped forward, revealing glowing red eyes. The creature didn’t speak, but the weight of its presence was enough to make Ryan freeze in place.

"You should not have come," the creature said, its voice a low growl.

Ryan's breath caught in his throat. The adventure had just begun, but already, he realized that the Veil of Eternity had opened a door to something far darker than he could have ever imagined.

To Be Continued.

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The Universal Pen

From tech and travel to facts and fiction. With endless curiosity and a passion for sharing fresh perspectives, I bring you engaging content that sparks curiosity and inspires. Join me on this journey, let’s discover something new together.

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  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    I love the eternal veil! Great work

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