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The Veil of Eternity

Two Souls, One Fate

By The Universal PenPublished 10 months ago 4 min read

Part 2: The Key to Unlocking Destiny

Ryan Carter’s breath was ragged, his heart hammering against his ribs as he stared at the shadowy figure that had emerged from the mist. It was humanoid, yet… wrong. Its elongated limbs bent at unnatural angles, and its presence felt as if it were both there and not there at the same time.

"You should not have come," the creature’s voice rumbled—not spoken aloud but echoing inside Ryan’s head like a whisper laced with malice.

Ryan’s fingers clenched into fists. Every instinct screamed at him to run, but his body refused to move. The creature’s glowing red eyes locked onto his, and for a terrifying moment, he felt as if it were staring straight into his soul, peeling back the layers of his existence.

Then, without warning, it lunged.

Ryan barely had time to react. He threw himself to the side, hitting the ground hard as a burst of cold air slashed past him. The creature’s hand—if it could be called that—had barely missed his head. But it didn’t stop. It twisted toward him, its form blurring as though shifting between realities.

Ryan scrambled to his feet and ran. His eyes darted wildly, searching for an escape. That’s when he saw it—the massive stone gate behind him, pulsing faintly, ancient carvings glowing as though in response to his presence. He had no idea what lay beyond, but staying here meant death.

He sprinted toward the gate, ignoring the burning in his legs. The creature shrieked—a horrible, distorted sound—before launching itself at him once more.

Ryan reached the gate just in time. Desperation overrode hesitation, and he threw himself forward, his fingers brushing against the ancient carvings.

The world shattered.

A blinding light consumed everything, washing over him like a tidal wave.

And then—silence.

Between Two Worlds

Ryan gasped as he hit solid ground, his body jolting as if he had been dropped from a great height. His senses swam, his vision blurred with hues of violet and gold. Slowly, he pushed himself up, struggling to comprehend what had just happened.

He was no longer in the jungle. He wasn’t even in the temple.

Instead, he stood in the middle of an endless expanse, a place that shouldn’t exist. The ground beneath him was soft, covered in glowing grass that shimmered under an unnatural sky. Floating islands drifted in the distance, waterfalls spilling into nothingness. The air felt alive, humming with unseen energy.

Ryan turned in slow circles, struggling to make sense of it. “What the hell…?”

A rustle behind him snapped his attention to the right. Instinctively, he reached for the knife strapped to his belt—except it wasn’t there.

Before he could react, a voice rang out, sharp and commanding.

"You don't belong here."

Ryan spun around to find a woman standing a few feet away, gripping a curved dagger.

She was unlike anyone he had ever seen. Her dark hair was streaked with silver at the tips, her piercing green eyes practically glowing in the strange light. She wore a fitted, layered outfit made of dark fabric, reinforced with leather straps and small pouches, as if she were a traveler accustomed to surviving harsh conditions.

But what caught his eye most was the symbol tattooed on her left arm. It was the same one he had seen carved into the temple walls.

Ryan’s pulse quickened. “Who—?”

“You touched the Veil,” she interrupted. It wasn’t a question. It was a fact, spoken with certainty.

Ryan hesitated. “Yeah… and now I have no idea where I am.”

The woman exhaled sharply, lowering her dagger just slightly. “You’re in the In-Between.”

Ryan frowned. “The what?”

She studied him for a long moment before speaking. “The space between worlds. A realm that exists because the Veil allows it to.”

His stomach twisted. “You mean… I’m not in my world anymore?”

She shook her head. “Not entirely.”

Ryan’s mind raced. He had always sought adventure, chased after lost civilizations and ancient mysteries, but this was beyond anything he had ever imagined. He had crossed into another reality.

"How do I get back?" he asked.

The woman’s gaze darkened. "That's not so simple."

The Price of the Veil

They walked in silence toward a massive structure in the distance—a tower of black stone, pulsating with the same strange symbols as the temple carvings.

Ryan stole a glance at the woman. "You still haven’t told me your name."

She kept her eyes ahead. "Lyra."

"Lyra," he repeated, letting the name settle. "And how do you know so much about this place?"

Her grip tightened on her dagger. "Because I’ve been searching for the Veil for years. Unlike you, I wasn’t reckless enough to touch it without knowing what it was."

Ryan huffed. "Yeah, well, no one exactly left a warning sign."

For the first time, she smirked. “They never do.”

Something about her words made his stomach churn. "Wait... have other people touched the Veil before?"

Her expression hardened. "Some. Most of them never come back."

Ryan swallowed. "And those who do?"

Lyra stopped walking. They were close to the tower now, and Ryan could feel the weight of something watching them.

“The Veil isn’t just a gateway,” she said quietly. “It’s a mirror. It shows you something about yourself that you’ve lost… or something you were never supposed to remember.”

Ryan felt a strange chill creep up his spine. "And what happens if I don’t find it?"

Lyra met his gaze, her eyes filled with something he couldn’t quite name.

"You’ll be trapped here forever."

A Memory Waiting in the Dark

As Ryan approached the black tower, he could feel its power thrumming through the air. The moment he stepped closer, the symbols carved into its surface lit up, responding to him.

Lyra stayed back. "This part is for you alone."

Ryan hesitated. "Why?"

She gave him one last look. “Because the Veil didn’t just bring you here. It took something from you. A memory. And until you get it back… you’ll never leave.”

Ryan’s heart pounded.

A lost memory?

Had something been stolen from him?

Before he could ask more, Lyra stepped back into the mist.

Ryan turned to the massive doors of the tower.

Whatever was inside, he had no choice but to face it.

And deep down, he knew—this was only the beginning.

To Be Continued.

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The Universal Pen

From tech and travel to facts and fiction. With endless curiosity and a passion for sharing fresh perspectives, I bring you engaging content that sparks curiosity and inspires. Join me on this journey, let’s discover something new together.

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