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The Snow Weavers

The day climate change turned our fields white

By Addison AlderPublished 9 months ago 2 min read
Runner-Up in 500 Word Shockwave Challenge

It was summer when the snow fell.

I was only 8. I'd never seen snow before, except in videos and online.

But from my bedroom window, I saw a white dusting. No, heavier than a dusting... A blanket, like linen laid across the yard and into the fields beyond the fence.

Even the bare trees (long dead; poppa couldn't spare the water from the farm...) they looked funny. Like awkward stick men with their arms sleeved in white.

I knew snow wasn't normal for summer. In fact, it wasn't normal for Oklahoma period.

I wanted to feel the ice crystals on my skin. I wanted to make a snowball and throw it at poppa. I pulled on my boots, tucked in my pyjama bottoms, and ran downstairs.

Poppa was at the back door, pulling shut the fly screen, then the door, bolting it, then he turned–

I will never forget his face.

His expression stopped me cold. Whatever joy drove my feet immediately drained.

"You stay there, angel."

I'd seen him like this twice before. Both times it was because of crazy weather. The tornado in February. And the previous fall, when it got so hot I cooked an egg on his tractor hood. He didn't much like that.

The climate had ruined poppa's farm. But where else could we go?

I walked over and he pulled me tight.

"Can I see the snow, poppa?"

"Honey, we're just gonna wait inside."

I looked through the metal gauze of the screen and strained to get some sensation of this strange new world outside.

There was no sound. The snow seemed to muffle it. There was no breeze either, not a blade of grass was moving. Just this perfect white stillness.

"I already put my boots on, poppa. I'll get my jacket so I won't get cold–"

Then we both heard it: a sprinkling on the roof. I looked at the sky, at the dark grey clouds, but I couldn't see flakes falling.

"Are they snow clouds, poppa?"

The sprinkling sound was spreading, from the front of the house towards the back, over our heads... I craned over the window frame, trying to see the snowflakes landing. But there were none.

"Where are the snowflakes?"

Poppa looked at me. His eyes were both sorry and sorrowful.

"That ain't snow, sweet thing…"

The way he said it chilled me.

Any other time I would've just asked him what he meant… What else could it be but snow? But somehow I just knew I didn't want to know.

The speckling, stippling noise was coming down the walls now.

Dark spots were appearing all over the snow. Like when raindrops land in dust. But there was no rain.

The noise wrapped around us like an itchy blanket.

I stretched up on my tip-toes and stared down at the nearest patch of yard.

Then I realised what I was looking at.

It wasn't snow.

And those weren't raindrops.

It was a web.

And they were spiders.

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About the Creator

Addison Alder

Writer of Wrongs. Discontent Creator. Editor of The Gristle.

100% organic fiction 👋🏻 hand-wrought in London, UK 🇬🇧

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  • Sandor Szabo6 months ago

    Addison! "The noise wrapped around us like an itchy blanket" That line *chef's kiss* I saw you haven't posted in a while. I've been trying to catch up on what I've missed in the last month. I hope everything is going well across the pond!

  • Narghiza Ergashova7 months ago

    "So helpful, thanks!"

  • L.C. Schäfer9 months ago

    Well done on placing 😁

  • Hamid Hussain Shah9 months ago

    Awesome! Whoever subscribes to me and likes all my posts, I’ll do the same for you. Let’s start now! Let’s support and describe each other!

  • Congratulations on Top Story 👏🏾❤️

  • Shirley Belk9 months ago

    Uggghhh...I got the creepy chills from those spiders! I loved the relationship you built between Poppa and granddaughter. Congrats!

  • Susan Payton9 months ago

    This story was haunting. I was as confused as the girl. Nicely Done!! Well Deserved win.

  • Congratulations on Top Story & Runner Up… certainly quite a twist at the end. Horrible!

  • Shadow9 months ago

    Congratulations! You did a great job.

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Henry Lucy9 months ago

    Great job you have done here, congratulations 👏🏼🎉

  • Rukka Nova9 months ago

    Wow. This piece is hauntingly beautiful and deeply unsettling—in the best way. The way you frame climate change not through data, but through the wide, innocent eyes of a child, is incredibly effective. The gradual shift from wonder to dread is masterful, especially that final twist. “That ain’t snow” hit me like a punch. It's a powerful reminder that nature’s response to imbalance won’t always come in ways we expect. This story lingered long after I finished reading. Chilling, timely, and brilliantly told.

  • Marie381Uk 9 months ago

    Very nice ♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️

  • Fabulous 👏

  • Ian Vince9 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story Addison. I love this pitch-perfect story to bits. Beautifully written and paced, with a neat, unresolved cliff-hanger at the end.

  • Vickie Radovich9 months ago

    Oh, creepy! I want to know what happens next!

  • 🎉 Congrats on Top Story — well deserved! 🙌 Keep it up! 💪🔥

  • Aspen Marie 9 months ago

    So good!

  • Snarky Lisa9 months ago

    Good storywriting!

  • Harry potter9 months ago

    nice

  • angela hepworth9 months ago

    What a twist!! I would have freaked out, oh my god. 😂♥️

  • Tasbir Kabir9 months ago

    nice

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Nope, nope, nope. I'm not even scared of spiders, but I think if it suddenly rained down thousands of spiders, I would pee my pants. Great storytelling!

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