She craved the fire in his soul
he fed her flames in verse
Their flesh combined made her feel whole
abolishing loves curse
Desire dances on the breeze
passion fuels the fire it stirs
His love for her, displayed with ease
as past and present blurs
A lifelong bond of blood and tears
broken by loves true kiss
Erasing both doubt and fear
into a world of bliss
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (11)
Gorgeous piece. Well done, my friend.
Wow, this was amazing, and that image was perfect
This was delightful! Exquisite rhyming and meaningful to boot! Good job!
yes - this is very good!
This is so gorgeous in so many ways, Kelli! Passionate and breathtakingly expressed. The rhymes are divine. I loved this line so much, "he fed her flames in verse" 😍😍 You are so talented!
I pray this be true expression for all you & yours.
Expressive poetry - lovely to read and flows well.
Great!!😊💕
I felt the passion in this...you always have such beautiful flow and imagery. Wonderful work, truly :)
Love that! So touching and sweet and with vivid imagery too! Love the use of fire in this poem.
I loved the whole poem, but those two opening lines are absolutely epic! Way to go, Kelli!