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The Power Of Poetry

Eternal Flame

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
The Power Of Poetry
Photo by Library of Congress on Unsplash

She craved the fire in his soul

he fed her flames in verse

Their flesh combined made her feel whole

abolishing loves curse

Desire dances on the breeze

passion fuels the fire it stirs

His love for her, displayed with ease

as past and present blurs

A lifelong bond of blood and tears

broken by loves true kiss

Erasing both doubt and fear

into a world of bliss

Love

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Gorgeous piece. Well done, my friend.

  • Wow, this was amazing, and that image was perfect

  • Brannan K.3 years ago

    This was delightful! Exquisite rhyming and meaningful to boot! Good job!

  • Bren3 years ago

    yes - this is very good!

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    This is so gorgeous in so many ways, Kelli! Passionate and breathtakingly expressed. The rhymes are divine. I loved this line so much, "he fed her flames in verse" 😍😍 You are so talented!

  • I pray this be true expression for all you & yours.

  • Jonathan Townend3 years ago

    Expressive poetry - lovely to read and flows well.

  • Great!!😊💕

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    I felt the passion in this...you always have such beautiful flow and imagery. Wonderful work, truly :)

  • Love that! So touching and sweet and with vivid imagery too! Love the use of fire in this poem.

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    I loved the whole poem, but those two opening lines are absolutely epic! Way to go, Kelli!

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