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The night stalker

Becoming Elizabeth!!!!!! (Snow Micro).

By Novel AllenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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Nathalie sat staring out the window as the snowflakes danced back and forth in the late November wind. How can they not sense her turmoil, her disappointment that Elizabeth Brighton, owner of Brighton Books had cancelled their meeting again, this was the third one this month. Nath had already written two books and had barely made enough to pay her bills.

The publishers had been so excited about her prospects that over confidence had now left her panicking. But not for long. Grabbing her coat and boots, she silently exited her apartment. Snow covered everything and stars twinkled down on snowmen as kids threw early evening snowballs at each other. A picture perfect holiday postcard moment.

Homes and businesses were lit up and brimming with holiday cheer, but not 218 Richview Avenue. I parked some distance away and walked swiftly through the double doors. There they were, the snakes; meeting in full swing without me. I crept quietly to the door, listening as they laughed and made plans for the movie deals on my books. Apparently I had not read the fine print...ha ha ha. Cheers...champagne glasses clinking.

I hurried back outside as the meeting ended...and waited.

I grabbed her as she passed by the snow-covered dumpster. A light flashed bright, electricity crackled and bulbs dimmed.

We emerged, me as Elizabeth Brighton and her as Nathalie Forster. She fell backwards in the snow, clearly confused.

"How do you say it on your planet? See how you like being me bitch"!

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About the Creator

Novel Allen

You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.

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  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Surprise twist!!! Love it!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    I haven't even read it yet because I had to comment on how stunning the image is 😮. Okay, I'm back now! and Damn! What a twisted lesson in backstabbing that was. Didn't see that coming! Well done!

  • An unexpected twist of events that captured my entire being. You write so well.

  • Weird twist. :l I guess it's kind of cool.

  • Oh wow that ending! Would have never saw that coming! What a twist! Would you be continuing this story?

  • Kodah2 years ago

    Loved this! ❤️

  • Especially if they've traded bodies but retained their own talents. Because then the publisher/exploiter becomes the writer with nothing to write & no one to exploit.

  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    nice💙

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Oh wow. I wasn't expecting that. Wonderful story!

  • This is great!

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    That's awesome

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