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The Hunt

1st September, Story #245/366

By L.C. SchäferPublished about a year ago 3 min read
Top Story - September 2024

The dragon drops his head with a rumbling snort. His breath scalds my face.

His eyes narrow, his head drawing closer.

Run.

I'm frozen to the shale digging into my palms and the backs of my thighs. It's sharp, and it hurts.

I'm giving you a chance, pup. Impatience rolls off his black scales like steam off a horse's flanks. You play along, or you die. His lips lift. I get a close-up glimpse of his teeth, like a mouthful of swords.

Why can't I move?!

I'm angry at myself. Fury is better than fear. It melts whatever has frozen me. Something molten flooding my limbs and sending sparks up my spine. Something to mimic courage.

I'm not thinking, or if I am, it's so fast it's like not thinking at all. Like my muscles have taken over, grabbing at any chance to survive. The rock leaves my hand and lands square in that shining eyeball.

For a fleeting moment, he flinches back. Was that shock? I've already rolled away when the roar blasts over where I'd huddled moments before. I'm on my feet, running, flying, with no idea how fast and far I have to flee to get out of range of its fire.

Claws and scales rattle over the stony ground behind me, too loud, too close. My feet won't go faster.

One thought burns in me: get to the castle. If I get back there, I'll live.

I'm not thinking any further ahead than that. I'm not thinking of power, legacies, alliances or pacts.

The path forks. To the left, a ledge, and the right, a steep incline. I head for the ledge, which is barely wide enough for my feet, and flatten my shoulder blades against the harsh rock. I hope it will be difficult to reach me here.

I scoot along, heart pounding, the path underfoot crumbling. Pebbles bounce down the mountainside. He roars above me. A tongue of flame shoots into the sky.

In a moment he'll take flight. Then he can melt my body where I stand. Someone whimpers pitifully, and I realise it's me.

My heart leaps when I find an opening in the mountainside and squeeze inside.

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Author's Note:

Word count: 366

(NB. This excludes the title, subtitle, and authors notes.)

Submitted on Sunday 1st September at 23:25

A Year of Stories: I'm writing (and submitting, here) a story every day this year. This one continues my 245 day streak since 1st January.

Please consider lending your support to the other creators on this madcap "a story every day" adventure. They're putting out excellent content every day!

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I aim to write these so that you can enjoy them as stand alone stories, or one after the other. If you'd like to do the latter (they're all very short):

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Especially if you are one of the wonderful people who has been staunchly reading these daily scribbles since the start of the year. I see you, and appreciate you very much indeed!

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  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    That was exciting!

  • Madison "Maddy" Newtonabout a year ago

    Excellent short story, love anything dragon-related, fantasy, medieval, this is right up my alley!

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    Just wanted to return and say, Congrats on your Top Story!

  • Alexander McEvoyabout a year ago

    Oh fiery! If only I had the time right now to read through the rest of them from start to finish! Love the rabbit like sense of terror, the instinctual action, all of it blended together so beautifully! Oh, and, congrats on a well-deserved Top Story!

  • The Dani Writerabout a year ago

    Whoa L.C! To use a British expression, that writing is ACE! Top story kudos!

  • Testabout a year ago

    I've had my eye on this one for a few days but hadn't gotten round to reading it!! Congrats on top story!! I'm still in love with this series!! Keep it up LC!!

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Superb! Action packed. I hope he befriends the dragon. I am always on the side of the creatures🥴😍. Congratulations on TS 🥳🎉🎉🫶🏻

  • Testabout a year ago

    Ask me to stop hunting you, because I will not listen. I want more...

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh, my heart was pounding!! Great action scene :)

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Back to say 'congratulations' on your Top Story! I loved this one.

  • Nguyen Anhabout a year ago

    Nice

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Back to say congratulations

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Exceptional sensory experience here with all your senses being so strong and powerful, truly a palpable and unique piece

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Very well-wrought action sequence!

  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    I think this is the first of these I've read and I do love a good dragon story. It almost felt like a choose your own adventure story. Like at the end you would ask if I would keep running to the castle or dive into the opening in the mountainside. Very well done LC

  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    Gripping story, had me holding my breath. thank stars for openings in mountains.

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    "Someone whimpers pitifully, and I realise it's me." Your story is captivating and well done, evoking images with each sentence. LC. Brilliant one.

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    You have a great technique for building tension. I hope there is more.

  • I think you captured the Fight-or-Flight state really well in this! Nice work!

  • That was a great story!

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    She’s still alive! This one has spunk and spirit! More please!

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Oh my, so much tension! Looking forward to the next installment.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Yep I'm liking this one.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Ooooh. Next!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Ooh, wonder where that goes...

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