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The Bar

A hero's stand.

By Jason Ray Morton Published 3 years ago 1 min read
The Bar
Photo by Louis Hansel on Unsplash

Jack watched as Willow pulled him another tap beer. Listening to the woman that approached him two hours ago drone on about life, Jack felt the urge to drown his sorrows in copious amounts of alcohol. As the crowd slowly thinned, he realized that his sorrows were the least of his concerns.

Cora sat there, like nothing happened today that made a difference. What she was doing, sneakily, had gone mostly unnoticed. As the crowd thinned again, he saw a chance.

Grabbing the gun in her hand, Jack flattened her nose.

"You're under arrest."

Jack was a city cop.

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About the Creator

Jason Ray Morton

Writing has become more important as I live with cancer. It's a therapy, it's an escape, and it's a way to do something lasting that hopefully leaves an impression.

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  • C. Rommial Butler3 years ago

    Nice twist! Here's my microfiction piece if you've the timeL https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/the-creature-lurks%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}

  • O'Henry's "Twenty Years After"!

  • Paul Stewart3 years ago

    Great entry!

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