The Anatomy of a Slip
Microfiction for Fiction community as part of my ABCommunities Challenge week ending 15/04/25
Tim gazed curiously at his reflection in the mirror, his moral slip weighing heavily on his already fractious mind. Laughter from beyond the bathroom pierced through flesh, sinew, muscle, and marrow—straight to his metaphysical conscience.
How could he have been so selfish? Of course, he knew the answer.
When does a slip transcend into something more? Is it merely context, circumstance, or something deeper? When the intent behind it is crooked and decrepit, a slip is anything but simple.
A slip becomes the unravelling of a man. The making of the person they become.
Forgiveness is never beyond our reach. Tim had heard that, read that, knew it. Still. How can he receive forgiveness for something he took great pleasure in doing?
The evisceration of his conscience was painful to bear, but really it was his due. Through the agony, he accepted the ecstasy that came from what he had achieved. Beyond forgiveness, life was difficult, as what little humanity remained within him raged on, fighting battles he no longer wished to win.
A smile cracked across his grief-ravaged face, as he walked towards the laughter. Lies would be told, hearts broken, but he was happy.
Happy in his abandonment of any servitude to good and humanity.
Elation, for Tim, came from knowing he had surpassed such rudimentary notions.
No good or bad, just bad and worse. And why stay bad, when you can be worse?
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Thanks for reading!
Author's Notes: For my ABCommunities Challenge, Fiction was next. I've obviously written lots of fiction, so was going to either finish a story that was too long for the Absurdist Awakening challenge or do something else. I did something else. The above.
As a warning, teaser whatever, as Fiction is this week. The week from 16/04/25 to 22/04/25 sees me land in the Filthy community. Be warned, be very warned. Or teased. Or intrigued.
Here are other things:
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Comments (14)
Very complicit but still human, I think. I must be 200 pieces behind now. Do you even remember me. Lolzz, I’m still not on a lot. I miss all of you. I’m not great and I can’t seem to think my way out. Yet I’m here today, and I’ve not forgotten you.
💙 Last line sounds like the beginning of a villain's story
I have questions...but I also don't think I want to know the answers to those questions! Way to make a character extremely creepy without ever fully airing their dirty laundry!
Well written… seriously unsettling!😵💫 My Mum used to rightly declare: “ There’s some bad in the best of us and some good in the worst of us.”🤔While there’s life, it’s not too late for him to change direction 😳. Catch you on another poem or story.🤗
I agree with Rachel, a good microfiction makes me curious like nothing else and I'm full of questions! Excellent writing as always from you (though I want more lol)
Brilliant, haunting work with this one Paul! I am always impressed with the inner world's/character psyches that you are able to conjure up - this one is so visceral and compelling! Bravo my friend :)
I wonder what Tim's slip was and what could be worse? It's a good microfiction if it gets me wondering beyond it, I think! And I appreciate the preparation offered for Filthy. I shall gird my loins accordingly if that's not a metaphor too close for comfort.
Why indeed. Or why be good if one can be better? (Questions continually asked by many who realize how far short they have fallen.)
Lol, I'm definitely worse. Loved your story!
Scorched earth indeed - why stay bad when you could be worse. This was brill!
"Why stay bad, when you can be worse?" - best line I've read all day!
A slip becomes the unravelling of the man is a great line, Paul. Spose that’s the etymology of slippery slope?
Sounds like the man has sold his soul. Well done..
Oooo great little mind bender….