T w o - F a c e d
Psychological Micro fiction
"For now on, "Suki Kawaza" is you." She caresses her cheek with both hands.
"I don't want you to die."
"I'm going to be a beautiful ghost, Suki."
"I don't like the fact you're calling me 'Suki' already, it feels like I've already lost you."
"I love you, Suki."
"I love you too, Suki."
That's when Suki jumped off the building~
Not the Suki your eyes are perceiving.
However, Suki you will never understand why she fled her flight to cross the other side.
In life, there is so much we can't control.
If she wanted to flee from the war ahead of her mind, no one could've stopped her~
Except for... the now named 'Suki'...
*KNOCK KNOCK*
"Hello?"- Suki opens the door.
....
"Oh... your...your...alive?"- The man at the door said confusingly.
"Well yes, of course I am.."
"But then...who's on the floor dead outside the apartment building?"
"You must've mistaken for someone else!"
Why didn't she stop her twin sister?
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About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Dark, Surrealism, Psychological, Nature, Mythical, Whimsical
~๐ข๐ฝ๐ธ๐ป๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ผ ๐ฌ๐ช๐ท ๐ซ๐ฎ ๐ช ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฝ๐ฝ๐ต๐ฎ ๐ญ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐น~
If You Love Me, You'll Do It
I met Jason when I was five years old. I could say that I loved him from the moment I saw him. He was so handsome to me and I felt in awe by his presence. When they introduced him as the new kid in school, I wanted to be his friend right away. I remember it like it was yesterday. I remember his smile and how he didn't seem shy. He appeared confident and ready to learn. I waved at him and said "hello," before anyone else could even say a word. He sat next to me, and I asked him if he wanted to be friends. He looked so happy as he said, "Yes!"
By Sidney Smith (Sid Smith)7 days ago in Fiction
'20/20'
"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan7 days ago in Beat
Comments (24)
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Wow, you surprised me on the end.
Good ending, but the desperation and callousness of the family too. This was a very good story.
So intense!! Loved it!
This kept me on the edge of the seat
I loved how you did this, you have a wonderful style all your own. What a great story.
Ooh, I thought it was all internal, how painful!
What an ending! It boggled my mind ๐ณ Congrats on top story!
Whoa! you got me!! ๐คฃ๐คฃ
Surprise ending!!! Loved ot!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
Congrats on Top Story!๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ
Nice twist Kodah! This played with my mind for sure. Great top story!
Congrats on top story Kodah!!!!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ๐๐๐๐๐๐
Ha! The title has a much deeper meaning after reading the story, very clever! And congrats!
Great top story. Good on you Kodah! Fab twist!
Great story!
Wow! This is cold. But nice work on the ending. What are both named Suki-did I miss something, twins or not.
Boom. Woah. This is awesome. Well done Kodah and well done on Top Story!
Interesting twist! Iโm curious for a story now!! ๐๐ ๐คฃ Great story!
Whoaaaa, didn't expect it to be her twin sister! Loved your story!
The last line ๐จ!!! Well done , great micro fiction!
Nice twist , great story
"Not the Suki you eyes are perceiving".. a true twist!