Stick 'em up
Flash Fiction
Connor trembled. Until this very moment, he’d never considered the difficulty of staying perfectly still. As he stared down the barrel of the gun it became abundantly apparent. His hands shook as he fought the urge to wipe away the sweat stinging his eyes.
‘Hurry up!’ The man screamed. ‘I’ll fucking kill him. MOVE QUICKER!’
Connor closed his eyes and prayed that his colleagues would move with the speed of Hussain Bolt. The money should already be in the bag by now. What was taking them so long? Couldn’t they see the gun to his head?
He didn’t dare look. The irate man had said not to move a muscle, which was precisely what he intended to do; the most important game of musical statues he would ever play. He wasn’t the hero type. He was the do as you're told and go home to your children type.
He opened his eyes again, hoping the view would have changed somehow, but the gun seemed closer now, almost pressing between his eyes. He wasn’t aware he was becoming cross-eyed as he stared down the barrel. He gulped and closed his eyes again. His muscles burned as he kept them tense. He had the awful feeling he was swaying. If he fainted, would they shoot him?
The sounds of a scuffle erupted behind him. His stomach dropped as what colour was left drained from his face.
An earth-shattering bang echoed between his ears. The room fell instantly dark.
About the Creator
Sian N. Clutton
A horror and thriller writer at heart, who's recently decided to take a stab at other genres.
I sincerly hope you find something that either touches your soul or scares your socks off.
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives





Comments (22)
OMG!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!❤️❤️💕
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Argggg! What happened?!! Did he go home to his children!?! 😱
Hoping for Connor. May not have been him that got shot. Great microfiction piece. Congratulations on Top Story !
Great perspective to write this scene from. I was pulling for Connor but I had a bad feeling his coworkers were going to get him killed. Gripping intense story
Great short story. Very gripping, and love the ambiguous ending 😁
Congratulations on your Top Story
Congrats
Yay! Congrats on TS! Woohoo! I am pleased for you. Can you tell?
Very intensely immersed in the experience. Then blank. Good narrative succinct and powerful. Even a little funny: congratulations on top story!
Wow!
Congratulations!! Well deserved
Grippingly told!
Great story! Very intense!
Brilliantly executed...or was he? 🤔 Congratulations on Top story ...well deserved 👏👏😍
Oh! I really thought, if he just didn't look round...
My God that last line 😱 So much tension and so well done! Congratulations on top story! 🤍
Oh no, poor Connor! Loved your story!
Way to build the tension then, it's over but not resolved. Well done!
So, you're just gonna' leave us in the dark... 😂
Very tense.
Wow