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Stick 'em up

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By Sian N. CluttonPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - September 2023
Stick 'em up
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Connor trembled. Until this very moment, he’d never considered the difficulty of staying perfectly still. As he stared down the barrel of the gun it became abundantly apparent. His hands shook as he fought the urge to wipe away the sweat stinging his eyes.

‘Hurry up!’ The man screamed. ‘I’ll fucking kill him. MOVE QUICKER!’

Connor closed his eyes and prayed that his colleagues would move with the speed of Hussain Bolt. The money should already be in the bag by now. What was taking them so long? Couldn’t they see the gun to his head?

He didn’t dare look. The irate man had said not to move a muscle, which was precisely what he intended to do; the most important game of musical statues he would ever play. He wasn’t the hero type. He was the do as you're told and go home to your children type.

He opened his eyes again, hoping the view would have changed somehow, but the gun seemed closer now, almost pressing between his eyes. He wasn’t aware he was becoming cross-eyed as he stared down the barrel. He gulped and closed his eyes again. His muscles burned as he kept them tense. He had the awful feeling he was swaying. If he fainted, would they shoot him?

The sounds of a scuffle erupted behind him. His stomach dropped as what colour was left drained from his face.

An earth-shattering bang echoed between his ears. The room fell instantly dark.

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About the Creator

Sian N. Clutton

A horror and thriller writer at heart, who's recently decided to take a stab at other genres.

I sincerly hope you find something that either touches your soul or scares your socks off.

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    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    OMG!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Agapitus 2 years ago

    Nice story but can you guys please help me rate the article I wrote it is called The Princess of Change https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/the-princess-of-change-ivg60rt4l%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    Argggg! What happened?!! Did he go home to his children!?! 😱

  • C. H. Richard2 years ago

    Hoping for Connor. May not have been him that got shot. Great microfiction piece. Congratulations on Top Story !

  • Great perspective to write this scene from. I was pulling for Connor but I had a bad feeling his coworkers were going to get him killed. Gripping intense story

  • Mo Darasi2 years ago

    Great short story. Very gripping, and love the ambiguous ending 😁

  • Naveedkk 2 years ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story

  • Aaliyah Madison2 years ago

    Congrats

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Yay! Congrats on TS! Woohoo! I am pleased for you. Can you tell?

  • Rob Angeli2 years ago

    Very intensely immersed in the experience. Then blank. Good narrative succinct and powerful. Even a little funny: congratulations on top story!

  • Ruby Red2 years ago

    Wow!

  • Atomic Historian2 years ago

    Congratulations!! Well deserved

  • Trip L.2 years ago

    Grippingly told!

  • Great story! Very intense!

  • Sarah Horrocks2 years ago

    Brilliantly executed...or was he? 🤔 Congratulations on Top story ...well deserved 👏👏😍

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Oh! I really thought, if he just didn't look round...

  • Test2 years ago

    My God that last line 😱 So much tension and so well done! Congratulations on top story! 🤍

  • Oh no, poor Connor! Loved your story!

  • Mark Gagnon2 years ago

    Way to build the tension then, it's over but not resolved. Well done!

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    So, you're just gonna' leave us in the dark... 😂

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Very tense.

  • Jay Zab2 years ago

    Wow

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