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Song of Retribution

Under a Spell

By Mother CombsPublished 2 years ago 4 min read
Top Story - October 2023
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Mandrake root

Dragon’s tooth

Saffron powder

Angelica herb

Combined

Seeped

Strained

Into a goblet of gold

*

Oh, Goddess, hear our prayer!

Oh, Goddess, grant our plea!

Prepare us this night!

Gird us with your might!

Protect us from harm.

Protect us from malice.

Strengthen us for the fight.

So we last through to the light.

Oh, Goddess, hear our prayer!

Oh, Goddess, grant our plea!

*

Oh, Goddess,

Grant us strength

To do what is right

Grant us courage

To stand for what is honorable

Grant us the resolve

To stand the coming battle

*

As we will it

So shall it be

By the power

Of three by three

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In a clearing on the side of a hill, the Coven of the Ancient Oak gathers. You can hear their supplication to their Goddess and see the glow from their fires as they move in an intricate dance as old as time. Their faces, reflecting the ember light of the fires, look wicked in the darkened forest on this moonless night. Each one places an ingredient in a small cauldron on an ornate iron stand in the center of the clearing as they dance past it. They continue to chant until they empty their hands and fill their golden goblets. Then, they each stood in pre-drawn pentagrams and turned towards the circle's center, holding their goblets high.

*

We praise you, Goddess,

For answering our plea

We honor you, Goddess,

For granting our desire

To show our devotion

We now drink of this potion

*

Each Sister holds the goblet up to their mouth. Each woman takes a big, enormous gulp and swallows. Each witch lowers her goblet and moves in perfect synchronicity with the others.

Moving in unison, they march to where they left their brooms. The Sisters each grab a broom. Mounting their brooms, they take off into the moonless night sky, flying with the bats and other night creatures. They perform a few aerial loops before they fly low to grab some burlap sacks they had placed below in the clearing. Then, they fly off in single file towards the west.

The Sisters are going to war against the Sisters of the Setting Sun Coven. The Setting Sun Coven had crossed into the Sisters' territory and attacked them, killing some of their Coven. So, the Sisters of the Ancient Oak would do something worse than kill them. They would strip them of their power for what they had done to their fallen Sisters. This stripping of power was why they would need the strength of the Goddess.

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It takes the Sisters two hours to fly to the Coven of the Setting Sun’s domain; it would have taken even longer if they had driven a car or taken an airplane. But our Sisters flew straight as the crow flies to the Coven of the Setting Sun’s domain.

The Sisters land softly in the dead of the night and surround the Coven’s meeting house. They perform a ritual as old as time, casting spells and setting their hex bags. The next time the evil Coven from the West used their sanctuary, their power would be taken from them. None of the Witches of the Setting Sun would leave with their ability intact. None of the enemy would feel their energy being leeched from them.

*

Oh, Goddess,

We seek revenge

Against these who

Did harm to us

We look for retribution

To those who did us wrong

We look to take from these Witches

Their power to replace that

Which they have stolen from us

Oh, Goddess,

Hear us now!

*

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The Coven of the Ancient Oak chanted as they performed the ritual. They danced and frolicked around. Then, they grabbed their brooms and lifted off for home. Their work was done that night. The war had just begun. The mighty blow would strike the rival Coven at the next entire moon ceremony when all Covens would perform the Ritual of the Harvest.

The Coven of the Setting Sun would never have a bountiful harvest again. They would no longer have the protection from the elements that their magic afforded them. They would never be able to bless a union or a birth again. Their domain would fall apart. The Goddess would turn her face from them and ignore their pleas.

On the other hand, the Coven of the Ancient Oak would prosper since they chose to go through the Goddess and did no physical harm to any other witches. Taking a witch’s power may make the witch feel as if she would die each time she tried to use her power, but it did not cause bodily damage to the witch. After all, mortals lived every day without magic, and no dire consequence came.

The Goddess did not like her daughters killing each other and was only too eager to assist in retribution when anyone harmed one hair on her beloved children’s heads.

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FantasyYoung AdultShort Story

About the Creator

Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

AB

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  • The Invisible Writer2 years ago

    This had such a poetic flow. I loved the way you carried the spells and enchantments throughout

  • J. Delaney-Howe2 years ago

    This is fantastic!!! Perfect read this Halloween night.

  • Tressa Rose2 years ago

    Great Job!

  • Abdullah2 years ago

    Great story lining i love it❤️

  • Gerald Holmes2 years ago

    Great story-telling. I loved the way you weaved the spell through the story. It was clever and kept me engaged from beginning to end. Congrats on a well deserved Top Story.

  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    Beautiful storytelling!

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Loved your story, Mother. Congrats!!!

  • Thavien Yliaster2 years ago

    The Setting Sun Coven: "You tattle snitched on us You sniveling tattletales?!" The Ancient Oak Coven: "You disobeyed her laws, not us. Those who abuse their privileges will be stripped of them." Now, I wonder if the entire Setting Sun Coven engaged in the attacks of physical harm to the Ancient Oak. If not, would the goddess not be judicious and only punish those who have committed such crimes, even those of the Setting Sun that neither committed said war crimes but also didn't know of the bloodshed that would've been and that was shed? I am curious to know if the goddess will bestow magic unto the lives of the Setting Sun's daughters, or if the daughters will be punished for the crimes of their mothers. This feud could carry on into later generations and then further incite witch hunts to continue worse than that which took place in Salem a long time ago. Though, these days it would be more akin of likening the witches to other religions such as Paganism. A good story of righteous retribution, Mother Combs. A good story indeed.

  • Chloe Gilholy2 years ago

    The spell is brilliant and caught my imagination

  • Test2 years ago

    Very Well done! Love your poetry. Congratulations !

  • Great job and Congratulations on your Top Story 🥳🎉

  • Congratulations on the Top Story Sharon!!!

  • Test2 years ago

    Wow, this is so well written and such a great story! I love the spells, poems and imagery you used in this story!! Great work!

  • Kenny Penn2 years ago

    Awesome story, I like how it reflects the Wiccan Reed and sprinkles in some classic witchy stuff, just in time for Halloween! Congrats on TS

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Congrats on the TS.

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    We call on you, Goddess, This is our plea. This is our will, So mote it be. Love this .... can you tell that I'm drawn to witches?

  • JBaz2 years ago

    So well worded. love the build. Congratulations on Top Story

  • Test2 years ago

    Congratulations on achieving top story status! 💕❤️❤️

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Nice story telling

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    That was good. All the power and no violence. Well don3.

  • Colt Henderson2 years ago

    This was a good story.

  • Excellent for both the challenge and the season , a Top Story surely

  • Such a noble way to get revenge! I really loved that concept! Brilliant work!

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