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Silent is the Night

Wednesday 20th November, Story #325/366 - NOT a serial! I just wanted to use the image again ☺

By L.C. SchäferPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 3 min read
Top Story - November 2024

This is a tough time of year. It's been so long since his last feeding, and worse, he still has several weeks to wait. They stretch in front of him, yawning wide and black with needle-teeth of hunger pains.

The weather turns, and the cold deepens. The night dark pulls in, squeezing the daylight hours like a fat man pulling in his belly to edge through a tight space. These things only sharpen his appetite even further.

The coloured lights strung up all over town are switched on. Their cheery twinkle is reflected in every pair of eyes, both innocent and cynical. Another reminder of how close (and how far!) he is from satisfying his hunger. He glares at them. His bowlful of jelly grumbles.

Ahh the little tots, they are so soft and warm in his lap! The scent of them rises up from those adorable heads, with their curls, their mops, their pigtails and braids. He breathes it in and savours it, the buttery sweet smell of them. His hands twitch, how badly he wants to crush and twist, and slurp and chew and crunch... Their screams, just as delicious, a fine accompaniment to wash it all down.

Surely just this one would be OK. Just to keep him going. Hardly anyone would miss it.

Trembling with the scrumptious agony of denial, he hands over another poorly wrapped gender neutral pencil case, and shoos the latest smooth0-skinned, un-nibbled snack off his knee so he can welcome the next one.

Some of them know. They scream blue murder over their mothers' strained smiles and the click of a camera shutter. Noisy brat.

On and on it goes, punctuated by the things he always says. "Be good!" "You will, of course, behave well for another year?" "I shall know if you're naughty or nice, you know! I have a list. I'll be checking it. Twice."

Sometimes, to underline this point, he takes a red notebook out of his breast pocket and waggles it. A knowing wink, a stern finger wag.

It's all a lie of course. The notebook is blank. He doesn't care about their character, or what they do. Naughty or nice, they all taste the same.

You better watch out.

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Word count: 366

(NB. This excludes the title, subtitle, and author's note.)

Submitted on Wednesday 20th November at 22:54

The story behind the story: This is the second one I've done in a You Better Watch Out collection, which I'm doing to span that time between Halloween and Christmas. Enjoy!

A Year of Stories: I'm writing (and submitting, here) a story every day this year. This continues my 325 (!!!) daily micro-fiction story streak since 1st January.

ONLY FORTY-ONE DAYS TO GO!

Please consider lending your support to the other creators on this madcap "a story every day" adventure. They're putting out excellent content every day!

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Especially if you are one of the wonderful people who has been staunchly reading these daily scribbles since the start of the year. I see you, and I am extremely grateful for your ongoing support.

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  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Congratulations on top story!!!

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Congratulations on the Leaderboard placement, L.C!

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    How horrific! Bad Santa! Congrats on Top Story! And sorry for being so late to the party

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Congratulations , this was damn fine

  • Komalabout a year ago

    Wow! Congratulations on winning 2nd place for Most Discussed Story this week 🥳🎉🎉 Such a masterpiece

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Dang, this was a really good - and frightening - take on the ole' Santa's knee sort of thing. Careful what you wish for.......

  • Van deer basticabout a year ago

    Since my Uncle Justine introduced me to a love psychic my wife dropped our divorce case and has been the one advising me to let keep working on our marriage that it can still work. She filled for divorce last month because she saw a picture of me and another girl hanging out in a bar while I told her I was away from town for work. It has happened many times and I always feel remorseful and I sincerely understand that she was fed up. I am ready to change but my wife has already filled for divorce until my uncle introduced me to seek for love solution for crumbling marriage and it worked. My wife is back to the house and everything is better than perfect. All thanks to lovesolutionzspell.wixsite.com/spell my wife and I are expecting our second child. [email protected]

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Congrats on TS!🎉🎉🎉 Icky Santa, they had better watch out (for sure).

  • Laura Pruettabout a year ago

    Very nice dark take on one of the most famous Christmas holiday characters. Congrats on making Top Story with this one!

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    Department store Santa's are such a bad joke. Congrats on another Top Story L.C.

  • Qurat ul Ainabout a year ago

    Well written and congratulations 👏🎉

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Impressive!!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Testabout a year ago

    Ooooo!! I love the maniacal feel of this story!! So clever, LC!! Congrats on Top Story!

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    Nice twist at the end! Made me giggle. Well done.

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Congrats on the TS.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Back to say congratulations

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Creepy & crafty! Great description on gory goodness. Tis the season ❄️

  • Caroline Janeabout a year ago

    😅 I love how you repurposed trad Xmas lines to make them sinister. Fucked up Santa. Would not expect anything less!

  • J. L. Greenabout a year ago

    How absolutely horrifying! This is a great twist on ol' Saint Nick! Makes the song "Santa Claus is Coming to Town" a lot more menacing. Well done!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    That was excellent, and horrifying. Not sure I'll ever see a mall Santa the same way again.

  • Hahahahahahaha I don't know what's worse, a cannibal Santa or a pedophile Santa 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Sid Aaron Hirjiabout a year ago

    So it's ok to be afraid of Santa

  • Interesting piece here, LC!

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