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Samantha The Barista

Choosing a coffee shop leads somewhere.

By Jason Ray Morton Published 3 years ago 1 min read
Samantha The Barista
Photo by Hichem Dahmani on Unsplash

Sam was in Riverside for the first time in 20 years. He stopped at a new coffee shop and ordered a cup. There was something about the barista.

He waited in front for hours, until she got off work. When she started walking, he was compelled to follow. She played on he phone the whole way, never noticing him.

When she stopped, it was at a house. He awkwardly approached the porch where she sat.

"Why are you following me?"

Sam froze, staring at her. Then he knew, when a woman came outside. She had moms looks, and his eyes.

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Jason Ray Morton

Writing has become more important as I live with cancer. It's a therapy, it's an escape, and it's a way to do something lasting that hopefully leaves an impression.

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock3 years ago

    And were introductions made over tea?

  • Misty Rae3 years ago

    Ohhh, leaves me wanting more. Well played, Jason, well played. :)

  • PK Colleran3 years ago

    A nice feeling of mystery. Well done.

  • sleepy drafts3 years ago

    Wow!!! What a powerful ending. Beautiful work. ❤️

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Fantastic!!! Bravo, Jason!!!💖💖💕

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Oh, what a powerful ending! Awesome work :)

  • Pauline Fountain3 years ago

    I really enjoyed and did not expect the ending! It’s amazing now I’m reading this new genre for me and am truely learning from and appreciating the skills at their thought provoking stories carefully crafted. Pauline 🌸

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