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A Story Every Day in 2024 Dec 29th 364/366

By Rachel DeemingPublished about a year ago 2 min read
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Jade had seen the black sequinned dress. Christmas money meant that she could afford it. She'd over-romantised it in her mind. Cocktail parties, first dates, family occasions - she'd be a knockout! She had to have it.

She found the rail. It was still there. She'd bulldozed her way to get there. She grabbed it and was startled to find resistance.

She tugged it hard but it wasn't in her grasp. And then it was gone. On the other side of the rail, a woman. In a wheelchair.

"I had that first!" Which of course wasn't true and Jade knew it but she wasn't going to give in that easily. She could feel her dreams evaporating.

The woman in the wheelchair looked up at Jade's angry face and said, "I'm sorry but I already had it." Polite but firm.

Jade's anger threatened her good sense. She found herself saying, the spite emanating from her, "You can't seriously think you'll look good in it," looking her up and down, "can you?"

The girl in the chair narrowed her eyes. She said nothing but if she had been able to shoot lasers, Jade would have been crisp and smoking.

Another woman rummaging through the rail gasped. "How rude!" she said, loud enough for Jade to hear but Jade ignored it. Her focus was on the dress and getting it.

The girl simply stared at Jade and then, without saying a word, turned her chair away. Jade in an act of desperation reached over and grabbed the dress, causing the most bizarre tug-of-war to take place.

"Gimme that!" Jade said through gritted teeth. "That's my dress!"

But the girl wouldn't let go and then suddenly, did a sharp turn causing the footrests to hit Jade's legs and knock her to the floor. Jade felt someone tread on her hair, sharply pulling her scalp. Brutal pain. Somebody crunched her ankle. She shrieked as her fingers were crushed.

"Help!" she shouted.

No-one offered.

Then the crowd miraculously parted. A large hairy hand grabbed her.

"That's her!"

Jade was manhandled. A security guard.

"Hey! You can't throw me out!"

But he could.

And he did.

And Jade said goodbye to the dress.

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  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    And everyone enthusiastically said 'goodbye' to Jade, too! Couldn't have happened to anyone more deserving. This story reminds me why I never do the after Christmas shopping thing....

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Like Lamar, I'm a little torn on this one. Neither of them are perfect sympathy candidates. Just the thought of being caught up in such a mad dash gives me anxiety

  • Eek😵… I loathe shopping at the best of times… which this clearly isn’t 😳.

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    I guess you could say she felt jaded after that shopping trip?! Great writing Rachel.

  • This makes me question everything. I always thought disabled people would feel easily threatened. I'm glad she stood up for herself (see what I did there 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣). Jokes aside, I'm not disabled, but I would have let Jade have the dress. I sometimes hate myself for putting prioritising other's needs above mine

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    You got to know when to hold em and know when to fold em. Good one Rachel!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Somehow, I still feel bad for Jade. She shared with us how much she wanted the dress, and that little confession was enough for me to want her to have it. She should have gone about it a little different. But tis the season. Snooze you lose, lol.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Ah bargain shopping at its finest.

  • Glad I shop online. 😆

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    The joys of shopping in person 😂

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Oh, Karma, thy name is Rachel. Loved your story!

  • Gerard DiLeoabout a year ago

    What a bargain!

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    So intense!! People sure can be scary.

  • C.Z.about a year ago

    Oh man 😅 definitely hard to root for Jade after she was so rude. A great little story, reminds me of Black Friday shopping.

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