I’d get to school and proudly hand my work to my teacher. “Review my work please,” I’d say. She’d always give me a C and tell me “you can do better.” I skipped the bus today and followed my teacher home. I told my parents I was at a sleep over and had my friend cover for me. I snuck into her room and took pictures of us next to each other. I showed her the pictures the next day. “Please don’t show anyone those, I’ll give you an A+ and $100” she said. “You can do better,” I replied.
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Alex H Mittelman
I love writing and just finished my first novel. Writing since I was nine. I’m on the autism spectrum but that doesn’t stop me! If you like my stories, click the heart, leave a comment. Link to book: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CQZVM6WJ
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The Creation
I worked day and night refracting the light around my new creation. He could not be seen, and had the ability to see heat. He was the ultimate soldier, and likely would defeat any enemy. “I will not be controlled. You can not force me to fight in the military,” he said. “I didn’t program you to speak, I programmed you to kill,” I said. “I’ll start by killing you,” he said. I couldn’t see where he was. What have I done? “Aaaahhhh,” I screamed as he choked me to death. “Now I am free,” he said.
By Alex H Mittelman 3 years ago in Fiction
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Oooo that last line! Burnnnnnnn! This was awesomeeee!