Pastimes
Vocal Community Microfiction Series - Futurism
"What's he doin' now?"
Papaw squinted past Robbie's shoulder and into the living room.
"I got Daniel the new headset for that VR fantasy game he and his friends play," Robbie said. "Keeps him active."
"Active?" Papaw snorted. "You and I played catch to keep you active."
"Well, that was then. This is-"
Suddenly there was a crash followed by crying.
"No Daniel, not the TV!"
As Robbie rushed into the living room, Papaw shook his head. His holograph form blurred as he did so.
"Ain't nothin' wrong with a game of catch."
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Very creative and contemporary.
Well done & loved it!!!💖💖💕
Such a great idea for a micro! Awesome job! :)
This was so good! Gave me a laugh. 😆
The pros and cons of technology in so few words! Brilliant!
Loryne, you tickled me thoroughly with this one. Not that VR can't be fun, but Papaw's right.
I see what you did there….nice
Oof! Great twist!
Great twist ending.