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Mr. Shamji

Vocal Community Microfiction Series - Education

By Loryne AndaweyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Mr. Shamji
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Mr. Shamji was in the middle of evaluating portraits when the door to his studio flew open.

"Sir!"

An emergency? Mr. Shamji jumped up but frowned at the sight of Jeremy. He was grinning from ear to ear. "What is it?"

"OCAD!"

The Ontario College of Art & Design! It was Mr. Shamji's turn to smile. "Well, boy, out with it!"

"I got in!" Jeremy bounced through the studio and collided into him. "I actually got in!"

Mr. Shamji laughed and wrapped him in a big bear hug.

"I told you so!"

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Thank you for lingering.

SeriesShort StoryYoung Adult

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Loryne Andawey

Health, Happiness & Abundance.

Currently enjoying the company of Francis, Mike, C.H., Gammastack, Michelle, Cosimo, Kristen, Bronson, Bella, Talia, Sean, Babs, Kelli, Rick, Dharrsheena, Heather, Gina and many, many more!

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  • Stephen Betancourt3 years ago

    Great

  • I gotta stop expecting bad things to happen, lol! Loved your story!

  • So cool 😎👍

  • Leslie Writes3 years ago

    I love it! Give it up for the teachers (increase their salaries too)!

  • Paul Stewart3 years ago

    Nice positive little story, Loryne, Well done!

  • I remember those reactions well.

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