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Mirage

For Teresa Renton's "Safe Place" Twitter flash Challenge

By Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred Published 2 years ago 1 min read
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Introduction

This is for Teresa Renton's "Safe Place" Twitter flash Challenge which you can read about here;

The challenge is:

Write a 249 character short Twitter/X length flash. Title doesn’t count.

Prompt: OASIS vs BLUR.

This is mine

The music is "Mirage" by Santana from the album "Borboletta"

Mirage

Walking across burning desert sands, water needed, throat feeling like sandpaper, feel like there’s not long left, eyes blurring. Then an Oasis! Could this be salvation? Falling gratefully into the cool water, but it’s just hot sand. Another Mirage

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    This was tragic! A difficult challenge but you nailed it brilliantly!

  • Teresa Renton2 years ago

    That's fabulous, hints at a story beneath the story. Thanks for joining in :)

  • Well done.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Wonderful!!! Loved it!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Nicely done.

  • Great song! ❤️

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