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Loneliness

Alone Together Is Worse Than Just Alone

By Misty RaePublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Loneliness by Carl Parker. Photo used with artist's permission (www.parkerart.ca)

It's just not the same anymore. It's the same house, the same furniture, the same window, the same view of the beach.

It's the same two people.

Yet it feels different. It's wrong somehow, like two strangers, looking vaguely familiar, yet completely unknown to each other being thrust together.

Perfunctory politeness, the veneer of good cheer amid a sea of untruths, half-truths, and outright lies. An awkward truth born out of convention, obligation, I don't know.

All I know is there's no more lonely feeling in the world than the loneliness that exists when someone's standing right beside you.

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Misty Rae

Author of the best-selling novel, I Ran So You Could Fly (The Paris O'Ree Story), Chicken Soup For the Soul contributor, mom to 2 dogs & 3 humans. Nature lover. Chef. Recovering lawyer. Living my best life in the middle of nowhere.

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 3 years ago

    A heartbreaking situation to be in

  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    So very true. Beautifully expressed.

  • Leslie Writes3 years ago

    That is the worst kind of loneliness 💔 Very poignant piece!

  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    Very heartfelt Misty. Well done!

  • Heather Zieffle 3 years ago

    Loved this one! Great job.

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Oh, my heart! I felt the pain in this. Great job! ❤️

  • Caroline Craven3 years ago

    Oh I really felt this one. I don’t think you can be lonelier when you’re in the wrong place with the wrong people. Great story.

  • Linda Rivenbark3 years ago

    Sometimes, if two people can't be truly together, it is better by far to just be alone. Talk it all out with yourself alone.

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    oof. there's so much truth here. Love this one.

  • Test3 years ago

    Yes! 👏🏼 I had this epiphany when I was codependent. One is not the loneliest number, and some people need to take time to be alone before they get into another relationship. I love these collaborations you’re doing with Carl.

  • Ain't it the truth! And trying to heal that divide is long, difficult & arduous. Before the process begins, it seems impossible.

  • L.C. Schäfer3 years ago

    So true. Much worse than being alone by yourself, in a way.

  • Paul Stewart3 years ago

    I felt all of this. So well described. Great job!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Well done!!! Loved it!!!

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