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Incense and Iron

a short story

By Matthew J. FrommPublished about a year ago 4 min read
Top Story - October 2024
Incense and Iron
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It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen. Upon the keep of Tehmota Castle, gears within the ancient astrological clock ground past each other into an alignment not seen in a millennia. This night would usher forth a new era.

Patience. This is almost over. A miasma of incense hung heavy throughout the corridors. Tehmota’s Castellan Illic felt his weakness within knobby knees not used to descending the dungeon steps. Beside him, their guest slammed his heavy boots against the stone stairs. He could have traversed three in the time it took Illic to do one, and the guest made his displeasure known with each exhale.

“My apologies for what you are about to see. Our…prisoner required barbaric measures of restraint. I am glad our summons were answered so promptly.”

“The full moon rises soon. How did you catch him?”

“A spike trap. I thank the Prelate’s haste. Have you served under him long, Paladin Michael?”

“Sir Michael–not Paladin,” the Knight said brusquely. He kept a gauntleted hand upon his sword. Illic could feel his other, more dangerous weapon hidden within his steel armor. He wiped fatigue from his eyes.

“Sir Michael,” Illic corrected.

“I was elevated to Knight recently after the Battle of Cohac, and will be made Paladin once this affair is over,” Sir Michael said.

“We pray the power of the vampires never return. I have been struggling to get grain after the battle. The fields will need several more seasons to recover, I’m afraid.”

“They’ve lost their thralls and feed upon livestock. Their blood is weak. I fear this captive more. Let us hasten this business, and I will be on my way,” the Knight said, exhausted.

Young and eager, good.

“This way,” Illic wheezed.

Guards lined the dungeon with heavy spears and beaked leather masks. Burners of incense lined the dungeon–the source of the miasma. The smoke burned Illic’s skin and lungs. Not long now.

“Why do you hang incense here?” Sir Michael coughed. His voice warbled as he passed the guards.

“Guards and their provincial beliefs. They think the smoke will keep the disease away…foolish...hck…I…hck…know, but I need them,” Illic hacked through coughs. His chest burned painfully from the smoke.

“Useless and wasteful. It will do nothing against this plague. I recommend lighting these burners at the tops of the towers to ward off both wryens and ravens,” The Knight said.

“Of course,” Illic said. It was all the derision he could muster. Just a few moments more.

Soft moans filled the air as they reached the cell. Sir Michael peered through the iron bars searching for the source. No torches burned within.

“Where is he?”

“As I said, the measures of restraint were…barbaric,” Illic struggled to speak. Close now, so close. His courage and strength were failing.

Withdrawing something from the depths of his white robes, Sir Michael sparked a small torch. Illic fought the urge to recoil at the holy blaze. “Open it.”

Rusted iron gears ground past each other until they found the correct purchase and the gate slid open. Claw marks scared the stone walls and the moans grew more audible as they approached the far wall.

“How long has he been restrained?”

“Since the last full moon.”

Despite the shadows on his face, Illic could see the disgust shared. Silver blood ran down the wall from the iron spikes through his wrists. Bones protruded against taught pale skin, and gray decaying hair littered the floor. “Barbaric indeed, but wise. The blood of werewolves is strong.”

Illic nodded.

“Nothing to be done for him. Let’s get this over with.”

From within his cloak, the Knight produced a silver dagger, careful not to let the prisoner see it. He whispered his holy prayer and prepared for the ritual slaughter.

As he did, Illic stepped into the shadows. The guards moved silently, dousing the incense and removing its power from the dungeon. Illic felt his vigor return as the miasma receded and drew himself up to his full, unhindered height. The prisoner shook as light reflected off Illic’s pointed canines.

No scream left the Knight’s lips as the fangs pierced his neck.

Blood dripped from Illic’s lips as he threw his head back in a blood curdling howl, before turning on the dying werewolf still spiked to the wall.

Satiated, Illic rose and smiled at the assembled guards. Blood dripped from his fangs onto his black robes. He hacked out the last of the hated incense. Dangerous, but it had been essential to mask their stench.

“Our blood was weak, but it is renewed by the blood of our enemy. Come, my friends, and feast. Tonight, our dark crusade begins,” The Master Vampire said.

As the vampire’s of Tehmota Castle feasted, a blood moon rose.

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A/N:

WC: 800. Spooky season is almost upon us, so let the damned creatures come forth! Written for Liam Storm's unofficial challenge (sneaking in at the last moment):

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Matthew J. Fromm

Full-time nerd, history enthusiast, and proprietor of arcane knowledge.

Here there be dragons, knights, castles, and quests (plus the occasional dose of absurdity).

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  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    Always love a good vampire story, tricky wretches. Congrats.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Back to say congratulations on being in the winners circle

  • Testabout a year ago

    well done

  • Ab rahmanabout a year ago

    Good

  • Kenny Pennabout a year ago

    Oh my gawd hell yes Matthew! This story is awesome! Very creepy and perfect to start the Halloween season!

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Fantastic, Matthew! Was really drawn in by the setting and the great build to the reveal! Congrats on Top Story!!

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  • Testabout a year ago

    great

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Hurray!!! Back for the best of reasons! Congrats, Matt!!!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Such a magnificent story. I love a good vampire tale. Congratulations on the well-deserved Top Story recognition!

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Brother, your story presents a unique blend of depth and mystery. The writing style is so vivid that I can feel the moments when Ilik and Sir Michael are on their journey. Particularly, the horrifying state of the werewolf and Ilik's transformation process captivated me. The emotions and struggles of each character are expressed wonderfully in your imagination. The twist at the end creates a thrilling and chilling sense of hope. The way you have arranged the words is remarkable. Truly, this story is exceptional. Congratulations🎉🎉🥳🎉🎉🥳

  • Stephen A. Roddewigabout a year ago

    Guess who's back Back on the front page Matthew's back Tell a friend

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh yay! This got TS, congrats :)

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah baby, and by baby I mean pal, friend, chum, dude, the guy, the man, the myth, the legend leg end. Congrats sir, Top Story for you.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    pssst. congrats on the TS.

  • Bloody marvelous

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is wonderful. Great twist at the end. Well done, sir.

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Strong entry, my friend. And quite the deliciously evil twist! Very memorable and almost begs for a continuation, lol.

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Ooooh...I didn't trust him as it went on and then boom! Things just got intense and intenser until Illic's bloody plan came to fruition! Well bloody done, pal! What a great and wildly creative take on the prompt!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh, I enjoyed this!! I had a sneaking suspicion Illic was not as he seemed but wasn't sure in what way, lol. Loved the twist :) Very spooky indeed.

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Ooh, didnt see that coming!

  • Adonideabout a year ago

    As a huge Powerwolf fan, the title of your story immediately drew me in lol (one of my fav songs from them)! Then as i read more, I noticed the religious themes, and the addition of the werewolf in the end was soo cool. That is indeed, peak Powerwolf vibes, and your story is well-written :) Great work!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Magnificently penned!!! Loved your adventure story!!!♥♥♥

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Oh so good, now I want crack at writing another story for this challenge. Alas the time has passed. This was really nicely written

  • Jason “Jay” Benskinabout a year ago

    Nice work!

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