Fiction logo

happy to be lost

For Liam Storm's Time-Travel Unofficial Challenge

By John CoxPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 5 min read
Your eyes gazed intently out of a blood red mask, her hair and flesh white as ash.

Do you remember how we met? I ask softly.

Yes, you whisper, I remember.

The sun had rode high in the sky that day while I strolled through the surrounding trees, the sunlight pleasantly warm upon my back. Eventually I entered a glade where a doe and two fawns nibbled the surrounding grass. The doe looked up at me but did not bolt. Animals unafraid of men seemed a good sign.

But at its edge, I stumbled upon a path back into the trees. Man! Or whatever we have become 100 years in the future. With the sudden realization of the precariousness of my situation, I started to run back toward the campsite, imagining the worst.

When I finally reached it, everything was already gone. The time machine, our equipment and weapons. Were they attacked? Did those bastards leave without me?

Once I recovered my wits, I climbed a tree and searched the horizon for a place to hide where I could see enemy coming before they spotted me. The sun was setting by the time I reached the top of the hill that I spied from its heights.

Behind the hill's crest, an old hunting lodge covered in vines and tucked into the surrounding trees stood in defiance of time.

Miraculously, it had a potbellied stove in its center, still loaded with dry kindling. Gathering pine needles, I placed them atop the wood and began striking the flint I found on the stove with the blade of my hunting knife until the sparks lit the needles and gently blew on them to ignite the kindling.

I found an old blanket inside a chest of drawers and sat in front of the stove with it wrapped around me. At some point I fell into a deep sleep. Awakening with a start, I sat up in alarm to you standing in the pale moonlight in the open doorway, your eyes gazing intently out of a blood red mask, your hair and flesh white as ash.

Your friends left, your first words to me.

Why?

You shrugged, staring at me curiously.

Changing the subject, you said, Can I sit with you? I’m cold.

Yes. I wrapped part of the blanket around you when you sat, your shoulder pressed against mine. Whose land is this, I asked.

Corie Clan.

You touched my face gently, your eyes gazing unblinking into mine, my skin tingling with pleasure. The intimacy of the gesture surprised me, and for a moment or two I was happy to be lost.

Resting your head on my shoulder, you whispered I’m sleepy. I laid down on my back and you moved your head to my chest. I felt your breath, slow and steady, tickling my skin, my last thoughts that I desired you at my side forever.

But I awoke alone, the blanket tightly wrapped around me.

I stepped outside to see if you were nearby. Instead, I saw a broad chested man with arms crossed standing in the clearing like he was waiting for me.

He simply said, You need to come with me.

I thought about making a run for it, but I figured he was not alone and three others soon emerged from the trees. I followed him out of the clearing and into the woods and began walking downhill. When we arrived at the river, two canoes were beached.

The trip downriver took hours. But my captors ignored me while I considered all the things they might do with me.

The river flowed into a bay where several outrigger canoes rested on the sand. In the distance, an outrigger entered the inlet between two narrow strips of palm line beaches at the edge of the cove and headed toward the beach.

My captors brought me to a meeting lodge, set high upon stilts, where I sat waiting for God knows what. The sun had already set before a pair of boys brought me something to drink and eat.

The chieftain arrived with his guards and I was bade to stand and bow. He gazed calmly at me before asking, What clan are you?

One far, far from here.

What happened to your companions?

Left me.

Why?

I sighed. This land did not suit them.

He rubbed his chin as if trying to make a decision. But it suits you.

Yes.

What if I do not choose you.

I shrugged.

You can stay only if you marry a woman that I choose for you.

I thought of you and feared he would offer another. How can I support a wife? Let me prove myself worthy first and then choose me a wife.

I could see the irritation in the tightness of his jaw. He gestured to one of the guards and a few moments later the woman he had chosen walked in. I held me breath till you entered with your eyes cast downward.

Her father and mother are dead. She has inherited their lodge and voyaging canoe and is an accomplished wayfarer. Take her as your wife and consider it a great fortune at the behest of the Corie Clan.

I will take her, I answered, sealing the bargain.

...

You lean your white head on my shoulder like you did that first night while we sit together in the early morning light. Come on old man, you whisper, I have a surprise to show you.

Leading me to our voyaging canoe, now fully outfitted for an ocean journey, you look out at the sea with longing in your eyes and ask, Do you remember our first voyage?

I will never forget it. But we are old, and the seas are dangerous.

They were dangerous when we made our first journey, and you were a novice wayfarer. You’re no novice now.

I smile my assent, and you hug me tightly.

The winds are favorable, quickly filling the sail. Soon we skim swiftly across the water of the cove, fast approaching the inlet leading to the ocean, your eyes gleaming with joy once maneuvering the canoe into the choppy ocean waves. This is how I want to remember us.

Liam Storm's Time-Travel Unofficial Challenge

Fantasy

About the Creator

John Cox

Twisted teller of mind bending tales. I never met a myth I didn't love or a subject that I couldn't twist out of joint. I have a little something for almost everyone here. Cept AI. Aint got none of that.

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments (14)

Sign in to comment
  • L.C. Schäfer9 months ago

    A very sweet tale 😍

  • Your words are like magic, transporting emotion like the breeze. Wonderful story

  • JBaz11 months ago

    John yhou got me, I found myself choking up with the transition of time. 'You lean your white head on my shoulder' It jsut felt that they had the best life and they were made for eachother. This is really a special short story.

  • D.K. Shepard11 months ago

    This is wonderful, John! I agree with Shaun, there's definitely a surrealness to this. The way you deliver the story felt so tender that even though there were clear moments of tension there was a confidence that something beautiful would be found in the ending. And there certainly was!

  • Sean A.11 months ago

    It feels like a time travel piece and a dream all in one. Well done!

  • It's so sad that his friends left him. But it was so nice of the chief to give him a wife and let him stay. Loved your story!

  • Mark Gagnon11 months ago

    I enjoyed this story, John. It had samplings of all the emotions but not an excess of any one in particular.

  • I always enjoy reading your stories. You fill them with such colorful detail that I can explicitly imagine myself being there watching it all unfold. As per usual excellent job John.

  • Lamar Wiggins11 months ago

    I love this concept of finding love in a completely different time period. They say things happen for a reason and for your characters, it was meant to be this way. Excellent entry, John!

  • C. Rommial Butler11 months ago

    Well-wrought! You've tapped into that most primary reason, I think, that we read otherworld fantasies: many of us have had times in our lives when we'd like to escape and live a new and different life. There's also a neat juxtaposition: he was lost in time when his travelling companions abondoned him, and became a wayfarer in his new home. In a sense, we are all time travellers, aren't we? Even when we move in only one direction in one era, time passes and we pass through it!

  • Shirley Belk11 months ago

    I love the romance you glitter about in your stories, John.

  • Rachel Deeming11 months ago

    I feel like I've seen that red-faced girl before. Have I? This was, as always, great storytelling. Quiet love, grown from an almost dream-like encounter. I liked the naturalness of it.

  • Paul Stewart11 months ago

    Ever the master storyteller, this was an intimate tale wit lots of sadness at not fitting in that the MC was happy to be displaced! relatable in some ways! the descriptions put me there easily! well done, sir! one lil editing note- you say 'your' when it should be 'you're'

  • Alex H Mittelman 11 months ago

    I love getting lost in your words! Very well written!

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.