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For the Love of Caviar

Short Fiction

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 4 min read
Top Story - July 2024
For the Love of Caviar
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It's Caviar Day today! So I've come up with this short story in its honour of Mikeydred's Truly July challenge. Do read the requirements here!

Part 1

Bank Teller John Low dragged his feet as he made his way home on the Mass Rapid Transit. He prepared himself for the long train ride, leaning lamely on the grab bars to avoid inertia. The crowded carriage he was on gained ground. 

The 30-year-old's head dropped. He was exhausted. Work had become drudgery, something one did to fill financial gaps or pass the time.

John wanted ever so badly to improve his lot in life. He was tired of the rut he was in. He gazed at the crowd filling the carriage at each station the would train went to. A comfortable luxury BMW would allow him to avoid the rush hour crowd and offer him some respite from mundanity. 

John, still single, lived with his father in a small, two-room public housing apartment. The old man cleaned food court tables for a living, a fact that made John cringe. 

Part 2

As the train pulled away from the station,the stations, John pulled out a copy of the daily newspaper. A full-page advertisement caught his eye. 

It was for Chez  Lawrence, a pricey restaurant John wished he could afford. It's speciality? Caviar. 

John wanted to taste the eggs of the sturgeon at least once in his life but it was something that would stretch his meagre salary beyond its limits. Sighing, he stuffed the offending paper in his bag and got off at his destination. 

Part 3

John's father, Low Kian Pheng, waited eagerly for his son's return. The humble, older man had finished work for the day and laid out the simple ingredients for a family meal - eggs, a small chicken and leafy vegetables that he had bought from the market the previous day. His wife used to do the housework and shopping, but had sadly passed away from breast cancer that the family could not afford to treat. 

Saliva frothed at the sides of his mouth as he smelled the chicken soup he prepared. It was simple - he didn't have the money to add abalone or ginseng. But it was still aromatic and hearty. For sure, John would appreciate his efforts. 

The younger man opened the door to the humble abode. He glanced at his father and gave him a cursory nod. 

"Boy, I prepared dinner," he announced. John's response was curt. "I'm going out." With that, he ignored his father and donned the only pair of Levi's jeans he owned. He threw on a tee-shirt and banged the front door shut. 

The older Mr. Low sighed and sat in front of the television with a bowl of his simple but heartwarming soup. The reaction was an expected one; his son hadn't had a meal with him since his wife passed six months earlier. The young man resented his poor social standing and inability to fund his mom's treatment. Still, he hoped the boy would come around one day. 

Part 3

As luxury-loving as John was, he was diligent. His supervisor nudged him one day. 

"Hey, I've got some news you'd like,"

Disinterestedly, John looked up from counting the bills in his hand. "So what is it - you finally asked Sally out on a date."

"Hey, my love life's not your concern! But the news I have does concern you, though. You're soon going to be minding people like I am - the bank's hired a few new tellers, and it selected you as their supervisor!"

John nearly flew out of his seat. Finally, a promotion after 4 years at the bank. Maybe - just maybe - he could afford a meal at Chez Lawrence. He quickly sent a text to his girlfriend, Mindy, with the good news. Caviar didn't seem so far away. 

Part 4

John and Mindy show up at Chez Lawrence where a long line of foodies greet them. 

"Hey, I'm hungry. We'll have to wait an hour at least," Mindy petulantly crosses her arms and presses her Gucci bag tightly to her side. "Not to mention that I'll have to watch my valuables."

"Hey, it's Chez Lawrence. What could you expect?" John's eyes train the long line. "We can only hope it'll move faster." The young man was determined to taste caviar at least once.

Mindy snorted and dragged her comb through her well-rebonded locks.

His eyes landed on someone familiar and he groaned. His father stood just before him in the line. 

Please...please don't let him turn back, he prayed fervently. 

But Older Mr. Low did. "Boy, what're you doing here? I had nothing to do, so I just wanted to try this place out." 

"Dad, why waste your effort? They're not going to let you in anyway. Look at the way you're dressed." Mindy looked the older man up and down, taking in his bermudas and tattered tee-shirt. She sniggered quietly. 

 When they finally reached the front of the line, John locked eyes with the Maitre'd. "I think you can let us in first. He's not dressed for this fine establishment." He almost waved his father away. 

The Maitre'd gave the line a professional smile and made an announcement. "Everyone, thanks for your patience, but the restaurant's full. We can only take in one more person for now, " He turned to Old Mr. Low and gently guided him into the establishment. 

John stood, his jaw open, though it wasn't to swallow caviar. Mindy, having grown impatient, had left him standing alone. She had gotten a friend, Bob, to pick her up in his new, red Porche. 

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    This was a great piece of fiction and very well written. Congratulations on the Top Story achievement - it's well earned.

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Amazing piece

  • Testabout a year ago

    I really enjoyed this.

  • trisno widodoabout a year ago

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  • EMAN RAJPUTabout a year ago

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  • I love the moral of this tale. Greed, never having "enough" and idolisation sicken me. On a funny note, in Sweden we have the common kitchen table Kalle's caviar in a tube. It's disgusting but people squirt it like ketchup on their soft boiled eggs and all though I hate it, I would try to pass it off as toothpaste as a joke, hee hee. Congratulations on Your Top Story Michelle!

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    You portrayed the characters well. Papa won the seat over the ignorant selfish son who couldn’t keep the selfish money chasing girlfriend. Congratulations on TS!!🎉🎉🎉🎉

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Rasma Raisters2 years ago

    Congrats on Top Story. Well done,

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  • Gerald Holmes2 years ago

    Well done congrats on the Top Story.

  • Staringale2 years ago

    Oh?? I don't want to be rude but the main characters are cocky and rude. But the story is interesting .

  • Not a fan of caviar or the protagonists but your story is excellent and pefrect for the challenge.

  • John and Mindy are both so rude and arrogant! I don't like them at all!

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