Flower Bed
650 Word Mystery- Unofficial Challenge

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she saw the sign there on the lawn
two beds for rent, with garden view
covered porch with chair to swing on
a handyman comes with it too
she sought a place of solitude
somewhere far off the beaten path
she didn’t have much else to lose
any life would beat the one she had
escaping the arms of one who loved her
with tender eyes and cruel hands
running away, this place referred
to settle in and start again
she sat for hours in the garden
the peaceful sounds lulled her to yield
she'd found a place that offered pardon
she took a breath and softly smiled
she settled in, unpacked a lifetime
she placed a candle in the sill
the peace climbed over, like a wild vine
she'd found the place, her dreams to build
the scent of lilac called out to her
as it crept beneath her window
at night she'd hear the branches stir
as she lay dreaming, lost in limbo
it would whisk her, into the night
like the breeze, with wings of angels
to places of complete delight
where reality and dreams were tangled
her skin the dark color of midnight
as soft as cotton, feathered down
she was the loveliest of sights
of any woman in this town
though most around, were curious
no one ever meant her harm
except a boy, notorious
the layman working on the farm
he had spent some time up river
such is the phrase for doin' time
he'd first met her, when he delivered
from the florest, a copper chime
he was smitten in a instant
lost in her eyes, a prisoner
he'd lost the penance for his atonements
when he decided he must have her
he made himself more handy to her
did her bidding, a jack of trades
and when the first eerie things occurred
he promised her, he'd keep her safe
she admired and praised him for his valor
she grew accustomed to his ways
to guard her from a fierce attacker
was sweeter than she'd ever say
he won her faith and trust in him
one late night, as the sun went down
and someone tried their best to get in
she found her dog, heaped on the ground
she vowed revenge, her anger brewing
much like the fear, behind her eyes
his every intent, was her undoing
her sanity would be his prize
she feared the man she ran away from
had found her solace place of peace
she called for help, but lines were down
still she tried calling police
she had no clue he was the danger
she trusted him beyond belief
she gave her spare keys to this stranger
who'd done his best, her, to deceive
her friends warned her of his cunning
they pointed out some discrepancies
but she believed he'd been forthcoming
seeing the side he'd let her see
it would be too late before she saw it
that evil look there in his eyes
he was the master, she the puppet
fooled by his vague disguise
she did her best to fight him off
but he knew every trick she had
there was no one left to call
too late now for turning back
he lay her down beneath tender weeds
her soft skin tattered, broken and bruised
he softly whispered, love, rest in peace
alongside her beloved dog, named boo
that boy stayed on, tending her garden
the flowers bloomed, the lilacs grew
the breezes stirred the floral curtains
the ones he'd bought in shades of blue
he placed a sign up on the front lawn
two beds for rent, with garden view
covered porch with chair to swing on
a handyman comes with it too
she'd disappeared without a warning
no one knew to where or when she'd left
so, there was no one to give forewarning
when the next one wandered in......
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (9)
That handyman may have been a bit too handy. Challenge well met, Kelli. Congratulations.
This is soooooo good! I love the plot twist, I also like the choices in structure and editing, like it forces you to pause and digest what you just read, well done! ✨
Can't trust anyone these days
Wow, a true Horror Story!!!! Nicely done!
Horrific!!! Yet, superbly written!!!❤️❤️💕
Ohhh, this one had me cozy in the garden, then BAM—chills. The slow build, the creeping dread, and that sinister twist at the end? Goosebumps
Nice work . Please check my stories out as well if you get a chance.
Such a haunting, beautifully crafted tale of deception.
Oh, very chilling