Hello, 911
Where’s Your Emergency?
Oh, Jeff... I love you too... but…
These zip ties are getting a little tight. Do you think you could loosen them a little? I could order us something special to eat, baby….please?
Texas Roadhouse on center, is just around the corner.
Jeff wanted so much to believe Susan’s pleas, but would she say anything to get away?
He approached her slowly, pulling a knife from his pocket.
Just then, the police burst through the door, guns blazing, killing Jeff instantly.
As they freed Susan’s hands from her restraints, she dropped the phone.
The 911 operator released the call.
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (12)
WOW! You blazed this one Kelli! Well done!!
Nail biting in so few words. Great entry and thanks for all your support
Hahahaha great idea and twist!!
Wow! Great plot twist!
Wasn't sure if it was a kinky situation gone bad.....Guess not
Oh thank goodness. I was worried she'd die. DX
That was a great entry. Well done.
Oh wow, this was awesomeeee! Take that, Jeff!
I was a 911 operator for 30 years. This seems too plausible. Lol. Good job on the challenge. 👍
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What a quick-thinking story in all ways. Good work.
Oooo... this is bangin'! Great challenge entry Kelli!