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Death's ribcage for a bassinet

Friday 8th October, Story #313/366

By L.C. SchäferPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 3 min read
Death's ribcage for a bassinet
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Mostly moss. That's what I remember when I went Through. Softer than you could believe, older than you could imagine.

The trees danced me, step by step, along the secret path. I've no doubt they wanted me. Wanted her.

it's ok, they murmured, all will be well.

As if I teetered on a cliff edge, I wouldn't look down. At the goo still darkening her hair, crispy at the temples. She turned her face into me, looking for milk, and I almost turned back.

Another step; her fate was sealed.

Tears should've tracked my cheeks. I should've been sad. Maybe I was, but I watched me from the outside. Like a dream. Another part of me wept blood instead.

I think my heart broke again. Hard to be sure. When the splinters get needle-fine. When every path seems like the wrong one, and the wrong one seems like the only one. Madness is all I can claim.

They sang. Beautiful. Soft, like moss. Snuck up. Wrapped me snug, like a spider does her dinner. Spinning footsteps out of me. Each one another layer of the spell we wove together. My feet dancing to their tune.

Felt like being drugged, or drunk. They released me at the Edge, where the Earth changed. I staggered, then flinched back as if stung.

I clutched her close. She knew I loved her, right? Even when I thought myself empty, my heart beat for her. Every cell of me had been re-stitched to love her, even as I thought all was hopeless.

The Elders stood at peace, stark branches still. Malevolence leaked out, but they tried to stem it. As if I were a horse, like to bolt. And they, the man making himself small, unthreatening. Muffling his spurs.

I laid her on that dead, black ground. I still didn't break. The irresistible threads of their lullaby held me together. The echoes of them resonated, because I was an echo too, was I not?

The Elders let me leave. Did they tip their boughs to me, a nod of deference? Or thanks?

I couldn't bear to watch the earth swallow her. Legs like lead, I walked away. Arms empty, eyes blurred.

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Word count: 366

(NB. This excludes the title, subtitle, and author's note.)

Submitted on Friday 8th November

Quick Author's Note

The story behind the story: I wondered if I could condense my sentient forest story (Whispering woods challenge) into a micro... I was working on it until very late, but I concluded the answer is No. It is impossible! This is my best effort. I chose to explore the baby's bio mum's perspective for this one. I will link the stories at the bottom if you're interested.

A Year of Stories: I'm writing (and submitting, here) a story every day this year. This continues my 313 (!!!) daily micro-fiction story streak since 1st January.

ONLY FIFTY-FOUR DAYS TO GO!

Please consider lending your support to the other creators on this madcap "a story every day" adventure. They're putting out excellent content every day!

Rachel Deeming

Gerard DiLeo

Thank you

Especially if you are one of the wonderful people who has been staunchly reading these daily scribbles since the start of the year. I see you, and I am extremely grateful for your ongoing support.

Thank you to those who leave feedback/comments.

I am still plodding away, catching up on reads. Where I'm already up to date with all someone's stories, I read someone else's in lieu!

If you enjoyed this one, the very best compliment you can give me is to share it, or read another!

My Whispering Woods entries can be found here:

Here's my latest dollar challenge. I think you might love it:

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Thank you again!

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  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    This was so sad and also surreal. Very dreamlike and disorienting yet quite compelling. And like Rachel said, what a title!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    I am haunted by this story and words like "wrapped me snug, like a spider does her dinner" and "each....another layer of the spell we wove.....dancing to their tune". So intricately and well written.

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    I thought this story felt familiar - I loved your entries into the whispering woods challenge. I thought this was fab too.

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Yep. Both pieces are separately scary.

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    That title? Brilliant.

  • Oooo, her baby dead? Hehehehehhe I love it!

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    This story weaves dreamlike impressions, real or imagined is impossible to tell. Stunning writing, LC. Both magical and terrifying, words woven to make the reader a little drunk!

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    What a deeply reflective and poetic narrative, evoking themes of loss, fate, and the connection between the self and nature.✨👍

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    I'm not sure what to say about this one. Written brilliantly as is your style. I was lost in the imagery and unsure who was going where. Guess I'm a little dense tonight.

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    What a dynamic tale you've woven. Its laced with sheer magic and emotion. Well done.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Is this an ancient ritual? sad, yet you wrote this with such a soft emotion that it flowed more like a dream than the nightmare it is.

  • Daphsamabout a year ago

    Incredible imagery, I felt like I was there. Magical writing!

  • Sean A.about a year ago

    So much wonderful imagery with such a dark, sad undercurrent. Well done!

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    LC, the beautiful and haunting style of this story put me into a near-trans state of empathizing with this poor woman who had to sacrifice her baby. The big question is, for what?

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