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"Claim of Blood: A Family's Unexpected Reckoning"

"It is a Young man who Claims to be their Son. Not only that, but he has a Small Thumb-drive Hanging Around"

By AbbasPublished 2 years ago 3 min read
"Claim of Blood: A Family's Unexpected Reckoning"
Photo by Amin Moshrefi on Unsplash

In the dimly lit confines of their tiny, one-room domicile, Peter and Maria huddled together as the rain beat relentlessly against the tin roof. They were a simple couple, living on the outskirts of a bustling city in a world where the divide between wealth and poverty was stark and unforgiving. Their home, barely more than a shack with a single door, held all their worldly possessions—a few worn-out pieces of furniture, a small stove, and cherished memories of a life filled with struggle and love.

Peter, a wiry man with weathered hands from years of manual labor, glanced anxiously at the door. It had been hours since the knock that had shattered the quiet of their evening.

Another knock echoed through the room, louder this time. Peter hesitated, then stood up slowly, his heart pounding in his chest.

When he opened the door, he was greeted by a sight that made his blood run cold—a young man, no older than twenty, stood on their doorstep, drenched from head to toe in the rain. His clothes were sleek and expensive, a stark contrast to the poverty that surrounded them. In his hand, he held a small thumb-drive, hanging from a chain around his neck.

"Good evening," the young man said, his voice surprisingly steady despite the tension in the air. "My name is Lucas. I believe you are Peter and Maria Jameson?"

Peter nodded cautiously, his mind racing with questions. "Who are you? What do you want?"

Lucas took a deep breath, steeling himself. "I am your son."

The words hung in the air like a heavy fog, suffocating in their implications. Peter and Maria exchanged stunned glances, their minds struggling to comprehend what Lucas was claiming.

"Our son…" Maria whispered, her voice barely audible.

Lucas nodded, his expression earnest. "Yes. I have proof." He held up the thumb-drive, gesturing towards it. "This contains my birth records, DNA test results, and legal documentation establishing my identity and inheritance rights."

Peter took a step back, his mind reeling. They had never spoken of a child, let alone one who would show up on their doorstep with such a claim. "How… how can this be?"

Lucas sighed, his shoulders slumping slightly. "I was born to you both seventeen years ago. Due to circumstances beyond my control, I was placed in foster care shortly after birth. It was only recently that I discovered my true identity and traced my lineage back to you."

Maria sank onto a chair, her hands trembling. "But… why now? Why come to us like this?"

Lucas looked down at the floor, his voice softening. "I wanted to find you sooner, but I needed to be sure. Now that I have legal proof of my identity and inheritance rights, I have come to claim what is rightfully mine."

Silence descended upon the room, broken only by the sound of rain drumming against the roof. Peter paced back and forth, his mind racing. Their humble home, their meager possessions—all now in jeopardy because of a son they never knew they had.

"We… we don't have much," Peter finally said, his voice hoarse with emotion. "But what little we have, we worked hard for."

Lucas nodded solemnly. "I understand. I don't want to cause you harm, but I also have a right to know my family and to claim what belongs to me."

Hours passed as they talked, emotions raw and tensions high. In the end, they reached an uneasy agreement. Lucas would stay with them temporarily while they sought legal counsel and tried to understand the implications of his claim.

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Abbas

Versatile writer skilled in both tale & stories. Captivate readers with engaging content & immersive narratives. Passionate about informing, inspiring, & entertaining through words.

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