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"Breathing Hope in a Suffocating World"

"It's Sometime in the Future in a Dystopian Society, run with an Iron Fist by its Government"

By AbbasPublished 2 years ago 3 min read
"Breathing Hope in a Suffocating World"
Photo by Idris Atolagbe on Unsplash

In the year 2150, the once-vibrant world had been reduced to a gray, smog-choked dystopia, ruled with an iron fist by an oppressive government. The air was thick with pollution, so toxic that citizens rarely ventured outside. Instead, they traveled through a network of tubes, sleek and metallic, that connected their residences to their workplaces and the few remaining small, expensive shops.

Evelyn stared out the small, grimy window of her apartment, the sky perpetually shrouded in a sickly yellow haze. The skyline was a jagged silhouette of decaying skyscrapers and industrial plants belching smoke into the air. She sighed, knowing it was time to head to work. The clock on her wall blinked 7:00 AM in harsh red digits. She grabbed her worn-out coat and stepped into the transportation tube just outside her door.

The tube ride was swift and silent. As she sped along the transparent corridor, Evelyn could see other tubes crisscrossing the city, each carrying its own stream of silent, expressionless passengers. The tubes were the lifelines of the city, a necessity born out of the government’s stringent regulations and the unbearable pollution.

Evelyn worked at a factory that produced air filters, a cruel irony in a city that had long since stopped caring about the quality of the air its citizens breathed. The factory floor was a sea of gray uniforms and tired faces, each person performing their task with mechanical precision. The air inside was slightly better, thanks to the very products they made, but it was still tinged with the omnipresent stench of chemicals.

Her supervisor, a stern man named Mr. Grayson, walked the aisles, his eyes sharp for any sign of slacking. "Keep moving, Evelyn," he barked as he passed her station. She nodded, keeping her head down and her hands busy. There was no room for error in this world; mistakes were costly and punishable.

At lunch, Evelyn sat with her friend, Nora. They ate their tasteless, nutrient-packed meals in silence, the noise of the machinery providing a constant background hum. Nora leaned in closer, her voice barely above a whisper. "Have you heard the rumors? About the resistance?"

Evelyn's heart skipped a beat. "What rumors?"

"They say there are people out there, fighting against the government. Trying to find a way to clean the air, to make things better."

Evelyn looked around nervously. Such talk was dangerous. The government had eyes and ears everywhere. "We shouldn't be talking about this, Nora. It's too risky."

Nora shrugged, a defiant glint in her eye. "Someone has to do something. We can't live like this forever."

After work, Evelyn took the tube to one of the few shops still open. It was a small, overpriced store that sold basic necessities and little else. She picked up a few items, trying not to think about how much of her meager wages she was spending.

As she exited the shop, Evelyn felt a sudden pang of longing for the world she had never known—a world with blue skies and fresh air, where people walked freely outside. She had seen pictures in old books, glimpses of a past that seemed almost mythical now.

Back in her apartment, Evelyn sat by the window again, the city's dull glow reflecting off the smog. She thought about what Nora had said, about the resistance. Was there really a chance for change, or was it just a desperate hope?

That night, she dreamed of clear skies and green fields, of a world where the air was clean, and the government did not control every aspect of their lives.

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Abbas

Versatile writer skilled in both tale & stories. Captivate readers with engaging content & immersive narratives. Passionate about informing, inspiring, & entertaining through words.

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