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A Reckoning

Epic Beginning

By D.K. ShepardPublished about a year ago 1 min read
A Reckoning
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Swish.

“Ahh!”

They were whipping her for tripping, for disturbing the order, for being an Outlier.

Silas was an Outlier too. They all were. His entire community had lived outside the control of the Swarm for generations. But now they had been enslaved. The Swarm border continued to stretch outward like an expanding pool of blood.

Those who had survived the slaughter during the takeover had been rounded up and put in chains. They were being marched down the road to a transport area.

“Silence!” barked an overseer as he drew the whip back again. The girl’s cries of pain shook her bleeding body.

Silas clenched his jaw as the whip sliced through air and flesh again. The girl shrieked.

“I said, silence!” the overseer shouted.

Silas halted.

“Move,” commanded a soldier.

Silas stared at the chain between his wrists. He had fought. He had encouraged others to fight. His bloodline was a respected one. It had been a great many years since their region had been ruled by one man, but Silas was a descendant of the last great kings. The Swarm had no respect for such things. They did not care for bloodlines, only blood shed.

The soldier shoved Silas forward.

The whip cracked again and the girl screamed a third time.

Silas felt rage coursing through him and the chain that bound him began to glow red. The center link was wrenched open and the divided fragments began to elongate until they dangled to the ground.

Like whips of iron, Silas grabbed the chains in his fists and flicked the left one at the soldier.

Shots were fired but they bounced off Silas’s skin like sleet.

He set his sights on the overseer who cried out “Who are you?”

Silas answered, “I am your Reckoning.”

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About the Creator

D.K. Shepard

Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now

Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.

dkshepard.com

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Well-structured & engaging content

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶about a year ago

    Ditto Kenny’s comments!✅

  • Kenny Pennabout a year ago

    Ooooo I so love a good story with justice, and this one had me at every sentence. Great job, D.K.!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Got chills! Good luck, not that you're gonna need it!

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    Wow! This was certainly an epic beginning! God I hope you’re going to continue and finish this one.

  • Testabout a year ago

    Ooooo! This was a gooder!!! Loved it!!! That final line... ah! Simply brilliant DK!! I'd love to see Silas kick some ass in another episode!!

  • Whoaaaa, that was extremely powerful! Loved your story so much!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Thats like a watershed moment if every I saw one!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Ooooooooh. Well done on this DK. Like Rachel and Kelli - that last line is awesome. Love the whole Swarm and Outlier stuff too and Silas will never not be a cool character name!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    I can hear Christian Bale growling "I am Batman", but the Reckoning instead...you know what I mean, right? Great story

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    What an amazing bit of micro fiction! I love your piece. The "Reckoning".

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    What a great story, D.K. and that last line? Great.

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