Swish.
“Ahh!”
They were whipping her for tripping, for disturbing the order, for being an Outlier.
Silas was an Outlier too. They all were. His entire community had lived outside the control of the Swarm for generations. But now they had been enslaved. The Swarm border continued to stretch outward like an expanding pool of blood.
Those who had survived the slaughter during the takeover had been rounded up and put in chains. They were being marched down the road to a transport area.
“Silence!” barked an overseer as he drew the whip back again. The girl’s cries of pain shook her bleeding body.
Silas clenched his jaw as the whip sliced through air and flesh again. The girl shrieked.
“I said, silence!” the overseer shouted.
Silas halted.
“Move,” commanded a soldier.
Silas stared at the chain between his wrists. He had fought. He had encouraged others to fight. His bloodline was a respected one. It had been a great many years since their region had been ruled by one man, but Silas was a descendant of the last great kings. The Swarm had no respect for such things. They did not care for bloodlines, only blood shed.
The soldier shoved Silas forward.
The whip cracked again and the girl screamed a third time.
Silas felt rage coursing through him and the chain that bound him began to glow red. The center link was wrenched open and the divided fragments began to elongate until they dangled to the ground.
Like whips of iron, Silas grabbed the chains in his fists and flicked the left one at the soldier.
Shots were fired but they bounced off Silas’s skin like sleet.
He set his sights on the overseer who cried out “Who are you?”
Silas answered, “I am your Reckoning.”
About the Creator
D.K. Shepard
Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now
Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (11)
Ditto Kenny’s comments!✅
Ooooo I so love a good story with justice, and this one had me at every sentence. Great job, D.K.!
Got chills! Good luck, not that you're gonna need it!
Wow! This was certainly an epic beginning! God I hope you’re going to continue and finish this one.
Ooooo! This was a gooder!!! Loved it!!! That final line... ah! Simply brilliant DK!! I'd love to see Silas kick some ass in another episode!!
Whoaaaa, that was extremely powerful! Loved your story so much!
Thats like a watershed moment if every I saw one!
Ooooooooh. Well done on this DK. Like Rachel and Kelli - that last line is awesome. Love the whole Swarm and Outlier stuff too and Silas will never not be a cool character name!
I can hear Christian Bale growling "I am Batman", but the Reckoning instead...you know what I mean, right? Great story
What an amazing bit of micro fiction! I love your piece. The "Reckoning".
What a great story, D.K. and that last line? Great.