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Tinsle Tales Benniebee and Walliewasp

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By Mark GrahamPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
children's book (pexels.com)

What do you know about the world of bees? Mark Leah has written and illustrated a children's picture entitled 'Tinsle Tales Benniebee and Walliewasp'. Where do bees of a certain 'breed' belong? This is the question that Benniebee and Walliewasp have to answer. Benniebee has to find a family and a place to call home. Walliewasp must find a safe place and where would that be for him.

Mark Leah has in a way written an early science book for young readers to learn about the different species of at least two types of bees. A question that can be raised 'Are bees of any kind our friends?' Mark has chosen a typeface that resembles manuscript printing to make reading fun in a way so that the pictures he created would help with making reading fun for he has made the illustrations look like crayon drawings.

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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