The Wizarding World of Plotholes
A micro-critique of Harry Potter
I don't understand the hype around the Harry Potter series that has people so torn about boycotting it for the author's hateful opinions. J.K. Rowling never was a good writer; she just built a moderately interesting world perfect for fan fiction to fill the gaps she left in her work.
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I'm also a fan but you have made valid points
I’m a Harry Potter fan 😮 but you may have a point…